Bmarsh8545

Waste of time and coins, content because unreadable upwards of 100 chps

I’m into the paid chapters and it’s not adequately paced at all I can promise you, there’s not enough progression to justify buying chapters anymore especially when the ending portion of most chapters is just a repeat of the characters status info

Enjoyed it except for the sudden ending, it had more potential to be used.

The reincarnation of Pablo Escobar had me dying laughing 😂🤣

The huge amount of mistakes since chapter one as if the author doesn’t know what the word proofread means, added to the amount of free chapters/price of chapters after is a slap in the face.

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Perfect OP protagonist in my opinion, desperately asking author for more/faster chapters.

The constant grammar mistakes and poor writing quality that almost creates a stutter effect when reading has me wondering why the author didn’t proofread one bit before publishing, try again.

A masterpiece of a story, I’m completely hooked.

Needs proofreading and editing for multiple sections.