this is not a fan fic or any sort. I have taken the creative "liberties to parody the owner by misspelling his name on purpose and giving him a "interesting " personality Of course it isn't defaming or anything

zanes getting kidnapped

the grammar is a bit wonky and hard to read on a lot of the parts

ain't the plot btw ☠️

ah okay, I also have eye issues and I was just wondering "why the bold"

the only reason why I took a point off is because of how short the chapters are as I feel like more can be expanded on each chapter to give a more "detailed " look at the game.

While the story itself isn't actually bad I don't necessarily like It myself (that's just personal thing).I don't generally like the Bold style for all text as it could remove some of the "zaz" on the more "impactful" moments on things you'd actually want to express as "important"

nice

It seems interesting so far

her moving there is more of a hax thing rather than a speed thing

speed*

she doesn't get irrelevant travel soeed

☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️

Fax ☠️

Fax, W Novel seems like bro already got the strongest demon 😈.I'd watch this if it was turned into a anime.

(review for the first 2 chapters I've read)the story isn't bad and most people can relate to the struggles of the main characters (as in being poor) especially myself.we can also relate to finding a new friend after awhile or not having a dad.Overall good :)

getting yo girl stolen by your UNCLE IS CRAZY 😭