Daoist9zTScb
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Daoist9zTScb13dCommentedThe man then leaned forward slightly, resting his elbows on his knees and intertwining his hands. "I am Bercouli Herlentz, the captain of the guard at this village's outpost. If you prefer, you may call me Captain Bercouli."- Daoist9zTScb13dReplied to TempestNotion
Please don't yuri 🙏🏻
As I watched their interaction, a surge of warmth filled my heart. But alongside the happiness, a pang of doubt crept in. Did I do enough as a sister? Did I offer the right advice? Should I have intervened more? - Daoist9zTScb14dCommented
Yeah, hiding his skills was the worst thing he had done and now he is regretting it.
Now he started to care about the people around him. Even if he will never admit it, Hana was his first true friend. Shisui was like a brother to him, even though he knew he couldn't do much for him. Kaen felt guilty for his demise. He always wondered if he had made the right choice to hide his skills. He could have changed his destiny if he had participated in the clan meetings. Perhaps he should have accepted the training from the elders. Maybe he could have changed their minds about the coup if he had done so. - Daoist9zTScb14dCommented"Very well, look at my right hand, focus on it as your life depends on it. This is a forbidden taijutsu move called," Kaen said and lifted his right hand. As the trio focused on and waited, Kaen kicked the de facto leader straight into his balls. "It is called Jewel breaker."
- Daoist9zTScb14dCommented"You smell like a dog, too," Kaen said, pushing her out of the way.
- Daoist9zTScb14dCommented
This need some rewrite
Ayane, with a reassuring smile,, "Don't worry about me. I'm a kunoivho after all, I'm not as weak as an ordinary woman." - Daoist9zTScb15dReplied to Gratiz_
- Daoist9zTScb19dCommentedAt the same time, they were in close enough to the Land of Demons, with a large and sparsely populated land, and held a wealth of resources in its desert, particularly a resource Shiraishi desired which other countries overlooked - Oil.
- Daoist9zTScb20dCommented
Same
For instance, her loyalty to the Will of Fire was now marked with a bug question mark, along with her ability to skillfully disguise, dame like Chiba Shiraishi. - Daoist9zTScb21dCommentedOne... four... seven... nine... thirteen...
- Daoist9zTScb22dCommented
Isnt this from Sasuke
"Storm Release: Storm Dragon." - Daoist9zTScb23dCommentedFeathers, the white swan, honked loudly as they made their way through the village gates, drawing curious stares from the villagers. Shun chuckled, patting Feathers on the head. "Ready for some swan-tastic adventures, my feathery friend?"
- Daoist9zTScb24dCommented
I just wish that yumiko is the FL and not Hinata, their interactions so far were great and the character has a lot of room for development.
"M-Me ma-marrying b-brother," she screamed internally, her mind racing with a whirlwind of emotions - shock, confusion, but also a deep, hidden thrill at the prospect. - Daoist9zTScb24dCommentedBut only now did they remember that nowhere was it written that they were restricted to just cousins - the main family had authority to marry whomever they wished within the clan. In a desperate situation like keeping the bloodline pure, even mother and son are allowed.
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Deid
Gotta learn from him. Keeping a low profile is the way to go. Umu~. - Daoist9zTScb25dCommented"Hn" Hinami nodded and Hned, weirdly enough. I didn't think much about it as although it is Indra-like, hers was pleasing to hear.
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Bu
Shun looked at her seriously and said, "Of course, I would love our daughter, which father wouldn't?"