Qassem_999

I know the story and plot are your own work; I simply meant that AI is very influential in the writing style itself, not the plot. Sorry for the misunderstanding.Grammar isn't my strong point either.

The plot is good, but the writing style is awful. It's clearly AI. I ask the AI ​​to lengthen the paragraphs. Make each paragraph 20 to 30 words instead of 2 to 10 words. I literally get a headache from reading like this. Also, why is no one talking about this except for one person? Has everyone developed brain rot from reading AI-written novels or what? My rating is as follows: Writing Quality: 1 star due to the writing style. I will adjust the rating when the writing improves. Stability of Updates: 5 stars. The author is committed to uploading. Story Development: 4 stars minus 1 star because there are some things I didn't like, but the story is generally good. Stay away from Sengoku's goat!!!!!! Character Design: 4 stars minus 1 star because the main character's personality is like a child who's devoured five bottles of Red Bull with a pound of sugar half the time, even though you have the ability to embody the other characters exactly as they are in One Piece. World Background: 4 stars because you haven't yet set sail and shown us any islands other than Foosha Village, Marineford, and random, nameless islands that are destroyed during battles.

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Sishan

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I take back my words. The author rewrote the first chapter and it's good now.

The novel is good. The first chapter shows heavy use of AI, but it seems that the author reduced its use after the first chapter.

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I really enjoy the novel so far and recommend giving it a read.