Sometimes I couldn’t tell whether the MC was thinking to himself or talking out loud, but I liked how he was noticed and called out for it in chapter 6. Most of the story felt rushed, I was wondering why there was even a need for a time skip and we didn’t get to actually know the characters that were introduced, but chapters 9 and 10 kinda explains the reason why there weren’t any other important characters and the fast pacing. I’m liking the mystery though, chapters 9 and 10 leave you wondering what even happened and personally I still don’t know but I would definitely read more.

Chat… this is literally dnd chat….

Wow interesting start!