animasuffers

Classic Chinese character assassination at work. Senzaemon acting nothing like his canon self and instead acting like a generic cultivation sect elder huffed up on their own importance, "Kneel down, junior!!!" but also Erina kneeling to apologize for him lol completely craven. Also about the translation itself, I understand translators change the MC's name to make it more palatable for a western audience, but honestly doesn't that require more consideration? Instead of being a Chinese guy transmigrated to Japan now, he's a Chinese guy named VICTOR living in Japan. I think changing names is better done for works that have reincarnated MCs, which I've never understood China's weird obsession with their own names in reincarnations. Like Uchiha Lin Tian or something, makes perfect sense fr (not). In a situation like that it'd be fine for a TL to change the name to something actually Japanese so it fits the setting, even if the Chinese author constantly has their MC monologue about the superiority of Chinese culture and whatever, but here it's just really weird and unnecessary, we know we're reading a translation. Anyway yap over.

Dang bro. This name is the very epitome of authors that are like "Erm my MC needs a POWERFUL and MEANINGFUL name, not something mundane and boring!" Like bro. This would be fine if he wasn't slapped into a family relationship with a character who DID have a normal name, lmao. Emma and Dracelaisbeksoah whatever his name is, makes perfect sense to me fr.... personally my sister, Lily, and I, Murcielago Humphrey Hendrick Jr., get along very well, my parents definitely did not hate me shut up!!!!!!!!!!

i know this is super late, but this felt kinda silly to me. it's like... dropping into naruto, attending ninja academy, meeting naruto and co., calling hiruzen "mr. sarutobi," and then only realizing he's in the world of naruto when someone says the word "hokage" or something. anyway, really delightful fic so far

RawrSoFierce 💀💀💀💀 embarrassing ass name bro

i beg you 🙏 you do NOT need to bold literally every single proper noun and subject of interest, like you're snapping your fingers in front of a toddler trying to attract its goldfish-tier attention span. you DON'T need to do it. it's WAY more distracting and annoying than it is helpful to the reading experience. PLEASE bro. i beg you. please stop. this is by far the single worst writing trend on webnovel— fight against this diabolical tomfoolery 🙏

bolding everything that has even a modicum of importance in the mc's endless internal monologue is annoying and obstructs reading. keeping it to the system was better by every conceivable metric.

The intersection of different world's powers is always what attracts me to multicross, otherwise this is a standard wish fulfillment novel, the protagonist will effortlessly smash through everything in his way. That's what we came here for though lads. Not much content as of posting this review but I still like it more than the One Piece one which can also be found here on WN that focuses way more on harem gathering than actual protagonist progression. The strongest advantage of this imo is the absolutely FURIOUS update pace, several chapters come in a batch roughly per day, it's hard to say if this will last since translation is not easy work (thank you translator), but it's a delightful treat as far as I'm concerned and I can always choose between stacking chapters or reading daily.

Story and main character that is interesting, plus really good comedic elements. Pokemon choices are surprising, most of them are underutilized in Pokemon fanfics which makes them feel refreshing and they're developed well. System is also useful and pushes the MC and story forward in a non-intrusive way. Overall a very fun work.

Thanks for all your hard work

The fights are actually pretty good, I'm not really sure what can be improved about them. The only thing I noticed kinda related to fights is that his names for his Constellation Breathing forms... really suck. They just sound dull and uninteresting.