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I simple don't like her, if the author had developed her previously I wouldn't mind but she is the same spoiled little princess like in the anime.
I'll really wouldn't like Rias to be in a relationship with Aqua.
Hi man, I just wanted to say that I love your fic and I hope you keep writing. Also, right now I am translating your story to spanish and uploading it on Wattpad, of course I am giving you credit as the autor of the fic, and if that bothers you just tell me and I will delate it. One more thing, I did a cover for the story, if you like it you can put it as a new one, if not it's okey.
I have read few novels of this style, but of the ones I read, they were all pretty bad and I stopped reading them. In the case of this story, I have to say that I like it so far, it's not like I considere it a masterpiece but it helps me pass the time. In my opinion it feels like the MC has some personality, and the female characters appeard not to be brain dead, at least the first ones that appeared so far. Maybe the story becomes bad later and I'll stop reading it, but for now I like it, maybe I like it because I don't have experience reading these types of stories or I just like bad stories. IDK
The character of Issei is well made and not completly away from the canon. Because yes, in the canon Issei is a huge pervert and that flaw overshadows his other traits. But also he is a nice guy who is also really honest. You take the personality of Issei canon and you take away his pervertness. I don´t know if that was your intention but I like it. Nice chapter btw :D
The world is really unfair? I mean if you view it from a negative side yes, it is. But in the other side, I read a webnovel called Guild Wars and in a chapter the FMC said that the world is fair, gives misery for some poeple and for other gives blessings. I would,t say that is fair, but the world is what it is, some people have more than others. Ignore this comment, it is a random thought .
It only has 3 chapters but the author is showing us that the story is going to be more serius and dosen't show us that are two sides in the story, which are typicaly dark and white, but grey. Also it appears that the charcters are more profund in their personality, including the villains like Raynare!
Don't force yourself to add girls or to put some girl in specific when people say it, it´s and advice because some authors felt forced sometimes to do wath their readders say and this could ruin the story. Overall, the story is really good for now, keep going! :D
Keep cooking the plot you already have, you have been doing it really good, I trust the process.
I prefer this option. Keep your work, the story is good.