Thanks for the review. I am working on it. I also felt the same after reading for sometime. You should notice a change in this around chapter 46 or 47 onwards.

Yes, he is but he hasn't gotten time yet as he is being put through one situation after another. It will be soon.

There will romance but no harem.

Author here writing a review for my own book. This is my first time writing a novel. So I am not sure how the readers feels from their perspective when they are reading. So please feel to put in a feedback when you feel the story is lagging. Also please add your suggestions so that I can improve my story. Thanks for your support.

Sorry if you felt it cringey. This is my first novel and not very experienced in this feild. Please give more feedback’s in the future. I will improve.

Thanks for the suggestions . Will create one soon.

Also just to make it clear the bloodline in my novel doesn’t mean the genetics. It’s kind of like special physiques you see in the wuxia novels. Different kind of bloodlines grant you different abilities.

Just by giving a drop of his bloodline does’nt make her his daughter. Besides this bloodline is the one that was provided to the MC by Bella’s master. But of course there will be close connection between the MC and this girl which will be revealed in the next few chapters. Thanks for the your support

In future he will come in contact with law of soul. As for reincarnation haven’t thought about it. But he will coming in contact with other laws due to his special physique which will be explained in the later chapters.

It.s using DNA.s to alter preexisting humans.

You,re welcome. Please put in your feedback’s if you feel the story is lacking something . Thanks

The MC in this story is a bit cold and ruthless. He is also very cautious and cunning.And he is trying to get strong as fast as possible due to the mysterious entity’s warning. I have thought about creating an organisation but I am not sure if a academy is fit for his character . In mind, it should something he can run by staying behind the scenes. Also , this story is not just an independent story. My idea is to make this into an universe like marvel. So there will be other characters in different novels. My plan is for each of them to control a different type of organisation .

Not a kingdom or a clan. As for the organisation, I am thinking about it. I have some ideas in my mind. This is just one of the worlds that MC will be in.

Hi , not sure what Tftc mean?

Thanks, I will take that into consideration .

Hi, this is the Author. I would appreciate it if you could read the novel and leave some comments on how it is. I am new to this so I am not sure where I have to improve.