Ovarou_RDE

+1

You have a decent idea for your story but given the amount of miss spelled words it diluted your story. Also, this could just be me but if I am wanting to read a fanfic about something like naruto or one piece. I would prefer to have the mc getting involved with characters from the work.Even so I understand your options are a little limited give the time period your mc was born in if you go with an oc try your best to add pictures to the paragraph you are describing them.

+1

To much it should be over already and that is a fact.