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1ndig03mthCommented40 students, not 25.
Ryou: "Correct, and now for our class, we have 25 students in our class. Can you imagine how much money worth is inside our class?"- 1ndig03mthCommented
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Ryou: "Correct, and now for our class, we have 25 students in our class. Can you imagine how much money worth is inside our class?" - 1ndig03mthCommented
This is ain’t true to Koenji at all. Koenji wouldn’t hesitate. Koenji act scared? Nah. What kind of wish fulfillment fic is this? The MC hunts wolves at like 6…like bruh.
The guy saw my eyes and hesitated a bit which gave the elderly time to sit down. - 1ndig03mthCommented
Haruno is really annoying and infuriating ngl. She treats everyone like utter trash, like they’re all way beneath her.
"ABOUT?" Haruno said with a playful expression, "What's the matter, Hikigaya-kun, you stop looking at yourself? Or do you already have an answer? - 1ndig08mthCommented
I‘m going to stop reading here. You keep stressing the fact that the MC is meant to be incredible which is shown as literally everyone praises him for doing absolutely nothing. However, the MC is just a plain disappointment. The MC was the person Minato had the most trouble with and he was, apparently, good enough to make Tsunade ‘try’. So how, how on Earth did he lose to Mangetsu and Mei of all people - they’re the same age as him as well. I’d understand if they were adults but the MC actually got OBLITERATED by them. I don’t understand why everyone keeps hyping him up and praising him. Let’s be honest, he isn’t anything amazing. I already made a point about how Tsunade wasn’t really trying in their fight a few chapters back, but this fight just cements that. Like, I’m not asking for an MC that’s super OP and all but I just want this story to be consistent. The MC gave Minato a serious challenge so how is he losing to Mangetsu and Mei? Is it just to advance plot? Minato is an S rank shinobi and one of the most powerful people in the world.
Ohashi had messed up. He had messed up greatly. His whole body screamed in pain, and his attempt at trying to stand up failed as the shattered bone in his legs made it impossible to put even a little bit of weight on it. - 1ndig08mthReplied to GuyInTheBackground
Yeah, it’s bad writing
"You said you wanted to keep on trying, we ate food, and we enjoyed the sights. You said you wanted to keep on trying. You've broken your chains… surely there is another way." Atlas said, shock taking him, why was he here right now? - 1ndig08mthCommented
I am going to stop reading. I’ve never seen such a braindead and useless MC, this seriously takes the cake. The MC is simply too dumb to counter Kenjaku and too weak to do anything else. He acts like he’s incredible but he’s rly just pathetic. He literally gets played by Kenjaku so easily that it’s funny
Atlas knew what he was doing, he had let Riko die. Now he was protecting her killer, he was villainizing himself to the Higher-Ups and possibly ruining his relationship with Gojo and Geto. But he didn't care, as long as he killed Kenjaku he would move on with his life knowing he was able to keep people safe. - 1ndig08mthCommented
Atlas is arguably the worst ‘planner’ I’ve ever seen. He should stick to combat and combat only because it’s the only thing he can do at a high level.
It would be fine. - 1ndig08mthCommented
I just know for a fact that Atlas is being COMPLETELY played by Kenjaku. Atlas has proved to be utterly useless when it comes to planning against Kenjaku, Kenjaku literally reads him like an open book
He knew that, and he wouldn't give them what they wanted, no. He was stronger than they thought he was and he would be able to get here whenever he wanted. If Kenjaku thought that the only way to properly deal with him was to send him overseas then he was dead wrong. - 1ndig08mthCommented
Author, you’ve messed this up. Izuku comments - and I think you should SERIOUSLY understand this - are extremely creepy and, in the real world, would definitely place him within the same bracket as Mineta.
Exhaling a faint sigh, Ashido, sitting with her arms crossed and a smile on her face, remarked, "He's a dangerous one, that Midoriya. He isn't a bad guy, per se, but he has the potential to become a womanizer. I'll have to test him when we go on our date this afternoon." - 1ndig08mthCommented
Arguably the most inaccurate rating sp far. His agility should be at least double, of not triple what it currently is
Agility: 40 - 1ndig09mthCommented
Dropping this right here.
Shiro looks towards us with a wide grin, "Shiro isn't home right now, my name is Kuro." - 1ndig09mthCommented
Yeah so the MC is gonna end up being super weak then? I’d say he will end up being average for a UA graduate, and below average relative to 1-A.
Also, he doesn't have NEN, he just has a quirk that has the properties of both rubber and gum. - 1ndig09mthCommented
Bro I’m done with this ridiculous trope. For some reason, for some stupid reason, every single MC who is an OC or SI always has to interact with Izuku and become the dudes best friend. After that, the MC is basically stuck to Izuku’s hip and d*ckrides him, literally becoming his number one fanboy and - at times - dog.
"But, you are in luck! I'm an American. And there's nothing more American than exercise! I will guide you to America's ways. You'll be a hero in no time!" [3] - 1ndig09mthCommented
And Aizawa is even more cruel to suggest leaving the kid in an orphanage. Aizawa is a hypocrite
"Plotting her to raise him because of numbers… You are a cruel man, Nezu." - 1ndig09mthCommented
Dropping this here. You’re a good writer but you do what everyone else does, there is nothing special about this story and this paragraph proves that. Of course you’d have the MC befriend Izuku when they’re children, just like every other story.
The kid scanned every corner of the park, looking for some lone target to attack. "Mmm... that one is alone", A green-haired boy shone among the other groups, he was the only one playing alone in a sandbox. - 1ndig09mthCommented
Please Author, get better at writing. This paragraph is among the worst I’ve ever read
What sealed it was your paws. You used both of your paws which is way different than the feeling of having a hand with 5 fingers. Besides that, I never felt your thumb. " Axel said. - 1ndig09mthCommented
“Who are you” sounds so confrontational. Use dialogue that is more comversational
" Eijiro Kirishima. Who are you? " - 1ndig09mthReplied to Kw0z
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What’s with this extremely cliche trope that’s just dumb? Where the MC of webnovel stories will always have this insane irrational fear which will, usually, lead to the MC hiding his powers. For example, in Naruto stories with Danzo or in this story where the MC is ALREADY worried about All For One. If this carries on then I‘ll stop reading because it’s getting tiring
My name in this world is Izaya Kurogami, and my mother's name is Ayumi kurogami, I am nervous but for an entirely different reason, if my quirk turns out to be too awesome then no doubt I will become the target of that faceless bastard all for one, I hope the doctor who is going to check my quirk is not kyudai garaki who checked Izuku's quirk.