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Mr_Minotaur19dCommentedBro this stuff is just unnecessary complications, but you do you. So far it's been like one huuuge prologue and set up for the overarching conflict, even though it's been like 60 chapters. I'm scared we'll never get to Alacrya because the author is gonna drop before then. This is usually the problem with tbate fics, they just drop around the end of the xyrus arc.
Ch 50 More questions than answers- Mr_Minotaur19dCommentedCh 15 Days before departure
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His aether abilities are kinda weak for personal power. Hopefully they get more powerful and he gets more, else he’ll play second fiddle to arthur. Also his legacy abilities are kinda nerfed, let’s see if they improve as he grows older I really hope author doesn’t try to forcibly “balance” mc when he made mc sound like a bundle of potential at the beginning of the story. Too man fics nerf the protagonist for artificial tension
Ch 12 Rebirth - Mr_Minotaur20dCommentedCh 30 | Xyrus Academy (4) |
- Mr_Minotaur20dCommentedCh 18 | Discussion and Meeting |
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Lol the mispelling is understandable because some people (such as indians) pronounce "lavatory" as 'levoratory'. I never understood where the extra syllable came from but I'd gotten used to it on my trips to india
I take off my youngling robes and hop into the sonic shower. It cleans me in seconds, and I'm now fully free of any odor or gunk. I exit the sonic shower and re robe. I should get my Jedi robes after Ilum. She must be saving those somewhere until I find my kyber crystal. I exit the levorotary and make my way to the booth in the common area of our ship. I don't want to disturb Master when she is meditating. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
this fkin kid wants answers on demand all the time.
I look out the windows at the site of being in hyperspace. This is the first time I've seen the blue lights of hyperspace. "Why does hyperspace look like this, dad?" I ask my dad a question, and all I hear is an amused chuckle. I turn my head and see both my parents looking at me. Mom gets up from her seat and walks up beside me. She kneels and wraps one arm around me. She kisses the top of my head and ruffles my hair. I still haven't gotten an answer yet. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
tell me whyyy he shut off the force
Well... Whatever he would make do. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
archer can use that. why can't mc use it. IT MAKES NO SENSE!
Pressing the button to turn the saber off, Colt sighed, if he wanted to use the lightsaber, he had to use the Force. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
we never got an explanation why he shut himself off. it just seems like a random nerf. author if you ever go back and edit chapters, at least put a brief explanation because it's totally outta left field
It was... Balance fluctuates frequently, making the blade unbalanced, and because he shut himself off from the force, if he tried to swing this blade, there was a good chance that he would lose his hand. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
good, good. now all he has to do is not puss out and deny the force, and he becomes a baller again
Without another word, he threw away the blaster and took out another bomb. peeling away the protective cover of her mask, he shoved the bomb into her mouth and stood up, walking off. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
author really messed up the mc's power projection since he made him seem more proficient in that first chase scene, then talked about his incompetence against a random stormtrooper, now he's presumably gonna win against a lightsaber wielder. The inconsistency is showing, and it makes it seems like the mc is just strong/weak enough for the plot to go in whatever direction you need it to. Like the mc is a generic cardboard cutout for a quest character
Ignoring the thoughts, for now, he focused on his objective, the fuel crates forgotten. His objective? The lightsaber. He was going to grab that thing one way or another. His eyes hardened behind the clone trooper visor. He still hadn't gotten the Phase two armor, and if this woman was as strong as his instincts screamed at him that she was, then this armor would not last. So wouldn't he, if he wasn't careful. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
heavy disappointment when author nerfs one of his wishes
His opponent used a vibroblade. Since there was no force to warn him, he paid the price for his arrogance. After that humbling experience, he didn't start using the force, since he was incompetent without the force, he needed to fix that, so he did. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
please tell me the mc grows up within a few chapters, or else I will lose hope with all this drawn out angst
Colt walked into his tower, Helmet held in one hand as he ruffled his black hair. It has been six months since he got his crystal. It has been six months since he shut himself off from the force And it showed. - Mr_Minotaur20dCommented
Oh god, why does a perfectly decent fic have to foreshadow all this irrational edginess. Here's to hoping mc grows up and doesn't thrust all his past hurt onto the present
With those final words, Taar Visla disappeared, leaving behind a livid force user. - Mr_Minotaur29dCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13: Shock