The_NovelCrafter

don't wanna spoil the fun

yeah i think this was my fault ,when i get the chance or when the novel is reaching it's end ,i will fix all the old chapters

fixed

lemme fix this ,thanks

I am sorry about this ,it was a period where i fell ill ,but still had to write daily ,yeah i will fix all these time inconsistency,when the novel ends ,so it will be like a rewrite of all the chapters so far

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Yes i will , once i am done with the auxillary chapter , i will leave a comment about it in the author note[img=exp]

I have something far worsed planned

Thank you so much for the kind words and the support! It genuinely means a lot! You're absolutely right about the inconsistencies in the early chapters. I won't make excuses for them. Some things were still coming together as the story found its footing and I appreciate readers like you who notice the details closely enough to point that out. The good news is that the story only gets tighter and more consistent from here. I have a very clear vision of where Sean's journey is going and the best chapters are honestly still ahead of us. I'm working hard to make sure every chapter that comes out from this point forward meets the standard this story deserves. Your patience and support mean everything and I promise I won't let you down.

Thank you so much for this suggestion❤️This is honestly one of the most helpful pieces of feedback I've received so far and I genuinely appreciate you taking the time to think about it so carefully. You're absolutely right. Instead of leaving readers to wonder and possibly get pulled out of the story by unanswered questions, it makes much more sense to feed that information in gradually and intentionally. Dropping small pieces of the system's true mechanics over time will actually make the story richer rather than just patching up confusion after the fact. I've decided to take your advice one step further. I'm going to write an Auxiliary Chapter dedicated specifically to explaining how the Supreme Rebate System works at its core. How it interacts with Sean's card. How the money moves undetected. Why the system operates outside normal financial infrastructure. Everything that makes the mechanics make sense within the world of the story. That way readers who want the deeper understanding have it available, and readers who just want to enjoy the story without the technical details can skip it and still follow everything perfectly. This is exactly the kind of feedback that makes a story better and I'm grateful you shared it. Readers like you are genuinely part of why this story keeps improving. The auxiliary chapter will be up soon. Stay tuned and thank you again for being so thoughtful and invested in the story.