Should have spread them first, because it's easy for them to hack into the phone/email account. Email them to the Hunter Association equivalent and to news outlets.

Stupid, a wasted opportunity to do some interesting character work. It would make more sense for him to resent her since her unrequited crush is the reason Alex and his friends beat him within an inch of his life. That creates some interesting conflict and hurts Alice, which you can then use as propulsion to develop her character.

more unnecessary exposition. there is no need to explain how the method works, show it when he starts learning it.

Lackluster opening. Should have spent more time introducing protag rather than jumping straight into action, at least 2 chapters introducing protag and his life before jumping into the action. The method of getting the ring is dumb, lazy and contrived. It would have been better even if it was just an heirloom or something that his grandfather gave him, something like that. Like I said in my earlier comment it was stupid and boring for him and us to immediately understand what the stuff inside the ring is and does, and what cultivation is. It would have better if he knew next to nothing about it and gradually came to figure it out overtime. I looked at your account and you have a habit of starting stories based on half-baked ideas that you continue for a few dozen chapters before abandoning and starting something else. Instead of doing that, take the time to brush up on the basics of writing and storytelling (since you've seemingly no clue) and take the time to come up with and plan a story from start to finish, something that you'll be passionate enough to actually stick to and finish.

Stupid. would be much more interesting if the concept was completely alien to him, something he figures out as he goes along. Don't call it a cultivation and don't give it a rank. Hell, don't even give it a name and have the language be something extremely strange and intricate that he doesn't know but is able to mysteriously understand in small fragments as he reads it.

picture or drawing?

bad description.

Intern level? Really? Not a strong start.

10m/s is slower than Usain Bolt. Do some basic math.

Why have they just been waiting there?

Too much exposition. Why are Wolf's Fang just standing there and waiting?

etcetera, not etc.

Go look for bandits and thugs, kill them instead.

freshly awakened with the power of a two-star Knight, awesome.

nah, it'll be fine

I thought that Warm Heart of Darkness would allow him to subordinate Haunts or something, something similar to what he did on Earth.

Okay, this is great. Best introduction I've seen in a while

Hah, as expected of the state. They are willing to let hundreds of innocents suffer and die rather than have their authority challenged.

Dialogue is amateurish ("for the BOYS!!!" Really?), prose is clumsy and poor. Much of the events are unclear and I have little sense of who this character is save for the fact that he feels guilt about something that happened in the past. You can't write sounds as sound effects in brackets, this isn't a screenplay.

stupid, just punch her and be done with it.