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I'm rating it myself. It doesn't matter if you call me shameless cause I already know I'm. Thus novel is for adults. (It doesn't matter if you're adult or not the thing is I have to write adult warning so I don't violate community 🤫)
bro at least thank me
You should have received power stones first I was thinking but after some time I decided to send it to you.
Shameless review. The first thing I want to tell you guys is that english is not my 1st language so you'll probably see a lot of grammar mistakes. And my novel is not that had so you'll probably find it interesting after you read 1 or 2 chapters. Bye hehehehe 😁
Ok. Thanks I will try.
Yeah if you want you can post your link here.
Your story is good but your story still has a room for lot of improvements like you can explain the things more briefly and clearly. And im from the forum it took 45 minutes to read all of these chapters. This my novel ols leave a honest review like me https://m.webnovel.com/book/accepting-disciples-with-an-invincible-system_27344876005226405
Hey reader I will ask you one thing pls five a review According to you what can be improved and what is good in story.If you can if you Don't want then enjoy the novel you Don't have to be bothered with this☺️☺️
If you want a honest review then I will say it clearly your novel's world background is nit that good and you need to improve your writing skills. And over all I'll give it a 4.2 And I come from forum. Can you tell me A honest review I read your story for 1 and half an hour so here's mine it has only 2 ch right now. https://m.webnovel.com/book/accepting-disciples-with-an-invincible-system_27344876005226405
Can you pls leave a review it will helo me a lot
Yes I will try.
Probably in next chapters.
I am the author I rated it myself hehehe.