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Kefy02dCommentedit would be nice to know what other characters are thinking.
I need a feedback on something. I currently focus on the MC's story and POV and don't write other scenes that is not involved MC directly, like HIruzen's meetings with Koichi, Danzo's cooking yet another scheme, other important characters in the background doing something, and other things like that. I do run in mind the things like that while writing my story though, even if I don't write it directly. But now I'm not sure if this is the good approach with the story, as some things might happen very abruptly with that while no one would see that coming. So guys, I'm asking for some feedback here, what you think I should do? Should I continue with current approach with mostly MC's point of view, or should I write more scenes without MC to make story more fluent and with less too-abrupt events?]- Kefy03dCommented
giving an artifact over some test, bruhhh
"I heard that you've been born with a mana circle. if you let us pass, I'll give you the artifact - Moonlight Ring."detailI'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!Others · ItsJustANightmare - Kefy07dReplied to Kefy0
wrong novel sorry.
Stepping off the train onto the familiar grounds of Hogsmeade Station, Lucas looked at the majestic castle in the distance. It was his last year at Hogwarts, and he was determined to make it count. - Kefy07dReplied to Brian70707
nahh this was a while back, but i ik he needed life force to do his stuff and staying longer would just kill ginny. but when he rewived him self he could of just went to the room of requirement fix the closet and warp to the alley.
Stepping off the train onto the familiar grounds of Hogsmeade Station, Lucas looked at the majestic castle in the distance. It was his last year at Hogwarts, and he was determined to make it count. - Kefy010dCommented
i doubt that nadia hasn't drunk something similar, he would just waste it by giving it to her. how dumb can he be.
Oliver felt it was a waste to drink it on his own; he wanted to give it to Nadia and receive tenfold benefits, but over the past weeks, he could not get an opportunity to enter that area. - Kefy010dCommented
the system is kind of trash.
'I have the system and could grow stronger than anyone else if I remain patient. Getting too concerned with my security is not optimal here… Plus she's right, the clan does not provide me with resources I should have…' - Kefy010dCommented
so he should have 10x more powerful physice than nadia?
[Strength: Level 3] - Kefy017dCommented"Good, as expected of you," Aurelius remarked with a thumbs up.
- Kefy017dCommented
why thoe, he has already helped her escape her fate. he could drop the act and explain everything to her. aaaaa hate low iq mc's.
Then, I will act the same way as in the novel for now. - Kefy020dCommented
hes like 1.77 m y the F they think hes a genin.
The Iwagakure ninja hiding in the shadows saw Ryujiro, a mere genin, wandering on the border and immediately showed a cruel smile. - Kefy021dCommented
bruh when he reaches 50% he should be hokage level. should of done it like this 0 - 15 genin 15 - 35 chunin 35 - 50 jonin 50 - 70 elite jonin 70 - 100 kage
Just one strike was equivalent, no more than the power of an S-rank ninjutsu, which was thrilling to think about. - Kefy021dCommented
just make Haki his kakei genkai. it would be cool if he could pass it down.
[A.N: A little info about Armament Haki, here in fight people would be able to see Armament Haki, it makes it easier to describe fight scenes.] - Kefy021dCommented
bruh will he not get in to the trouble for the rasengan? don't believe that was given to him by his family. hokage probably will question him how he acquired it no?
"This is the jutsu I'm going to teach you, the Rasengan." - Kefy021dCommented
bruh hes way more talanted than itachi, if he can throw as good as jonin, while being 7 or sum. itachi worked way harder, to reach where he was then.
100 points! - Kefy021dReplied to Kefy0
MC should of tried to pursue him, change his mind or sum.
Three days later, the news of Sakumo Hatake's suicide spread throughout the village. This powerful and gentle white-haired man had ultimately taken his own life. - Kefy022dCommentedCh 121 Chapter 121: I Will Treat You Gently
- Kefy025dReplied to TheUrbanGoose
same ☠️
Chapter 592 : Avoiding the Plague!