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That's a pretty good Naruto fanfic! Can't wait for your next chapter, author.[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]

Finally, someone’s translating this fanfic again after it was dropped. I’m so excited to see what happens next!.[img=More pls][img=Feeling it]

I’ll always be waiting for the next chapter from the author, so keep up the awesome work on this fanfic![img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

I really enjoy fanfics with an Overlord theme, but I feel like the character interactions can be a bit stiff and lack depth. The romantic or sexual relationships also feel rushed because they develop way too quickly. Lastly, there are just too many OCs, so the original anime characters don’t get enough screen time or proper roles.☕📝

the writing and grammar kinda suck but overall the story is pretty good[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]