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really good start but what era is it set during jaehaerys, viserys or close to the game of thrones time with magic almost gone with it being harder to use magic with the dragon extinct

really good i like how it's around the time the targaryen were numerous they mostly recovered from the dance with the eggs i think vallar daeron aegon and maekar should receive them.

you should do after hogwarts have him travel around to learn other magic like the druids of celts and have him make a magic ranking to publish to the wizarding world start at novice and finish at arch mage.

Really good start I like how it around hogwarts legacy would we try and find his ancestry because It seems he was born in the wizarding world so he not a muggleborn so maybe half or pure also can't wait to see the room of requirements or the map chamber that can only be access by Ancient magic.

really good but where is Maekar aerys and rhageal the other sons of daeron because they were born before 288 ac

Love the story you could show his status more so we could see how he doing also his valyrian blood is a lot higher than his nephews so he could have minor flame immunity with him practicing magic he might awakens dormant abilities in his blood.

This story has potential i would like to see how he survives the doom and where his family settle as the targaryen won't let them live in Westeros if they give bend the knee.

a staff as merlin in legends is known to use a staff of English oak and maybe a core of a mix between a dragon and the kelpie

Really like how it going i can't wait to learn more about the people who hunt magic and hope the people who arrived are the founders

Really like how the story starts i hope you mix the the world with the wizarding world and merlin tv show and could learn of the old religion of magic and learn more about his father and the wizarding magic in hp not the modern magic as hogwarts has just been built and does not have the reputation it later has.