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Late review, I'm sorry for the delay! The story has a lot of potential, plus it has RPG elements which I always like. It's not usual trope and settings but that's what makes it more interesting. I'm rooting for you and I hope you get contracted. (✿^‿^)
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- Book_of_Realms10mthCommentedCh 34 Part 1: Whispers from the Deep
- Book_of_Realms10mthReplied to Daisiesmp
I know right .He is the sweetest when it comes to MC
The screen disappeared and at the same time he found himself inside a thatched cottage. His cultivation was sealed. - Book_of_Realms10mthReplied to Daisiesmp
Don't worry, he isn't a child. He's over a hundred years old but retains his childish looks
The little dumpling shed his previous arrogance and turned around. He opened his small mouth and used a very cute tone that will melt people's heart. "Uncles, would you believe me if I said I did all of that because I was forced?" - Book_of_Realms10mthReplied to Daisiesmp
His world collapse right after Lianne finished her mission.
A certain someone ignored her anger and began contacting his other colleagues to release only raw materials in the future. - Book_of_Realms10mthReplied to DaisiesmpThen, Lianne groaned and sat up in a dazed. Her body was aching all over. Even her skull was cracked, plasma was flowing out but she was alive! Alive! She was alive!
- Book_of_Realms10mthPosted
Toshiro had written the story very well. You can really feel Kazuki's emotions vividly as journey towards revenge. The world building is also one thing I admired. He can breathe life to the words. If he manage to finish this story, I'm sure that it would shot up on the ranks. Rooting for you and good luck!
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beat him up till his mother don't recognize him
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ahhhhh????
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let me beat him up
Saigo's face contorted into a snarl, and the tension in the village square reached its breaking point. With a sudden, brutal gesture, he ordered his soldiers to raid the village, sparing no one but Hayato himself. - Book_of_Realms10mthCommented
oh no
Dark clouds gathered overhead as the first drops of rain began to fall, heralding the approach of an impending storm. The once peaceful village of Minoh seemed to hold its breath, sensing the unease that now hung in the air like a heavy shroud. Kazuki watched from the window of his small room, his blue eyes narrowed in suspicion, as a group of samurai soldiers entered the village square. - Book_of_Realms10mthCommentedCh 4 Part 1 : The Calm Before The Storm
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he he
"Your judgment has arrived," he snarled, lunging forward to slash at the exposed throats of the corrupt men before him. The shadow-infused rock cut through flesh effortlessly, and the advisors fell one by one, their blood staining the ground. - Book_of_Realms10mthCommented
a tiger is not enough more like a dragon
"Stay away from him," the other replied, eyes locked on Kazuki's back. "He's like a tiger waiting to pounce." - Book_of_Realms10mthCommented
can't wait for revenge
As the final hours of his incarceration ticked away, Kazuki couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction at the thought that soon, his enemies would pay for their crimes. - Book_of_Realms10mthCommented
very good intro
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