MC seems to be timid🤔🤔

So far so good, as time goes, I think your art is improving but don't go premium early😂😂

A cosmic prank it is 😂😂

is this the underworld where the dead end up

I think your story is okay. Just keep up with the updates. Can't wait to see the heaven you are saying[img=strong][img=strong]

The style of writing and story development is quite good. Am loving it already.

This is a great work Mr. Frost, keep it up.

well I give you 5 stars for your great trial,it's not an easy journey,good luck bro.[img=recommend]

Good trial but you should focus on your character development and language enrichment as well as the setting.