I like the story so far. I hope Annie gets her revenge on Susan and Jack. Those two deserve to suffer for going behind her back like they did. The story could use some editing and a proofreader. I can help with that. I'm a freelance copyeditor and proofreader. If you're interested in my services, please feel free to contact me. I'm trying to build up my work portfolio. Prices are negotiable.

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I like Ella already. I'm glad she didn't tolerate Cameron's nonsense or his refusal to listen when she told him she wasn't ready to be intimate with him. This story is intriguing. It does need editing and a proofreader. I'd like to offer my help. I'm a freelance copyeditor and proofreader, and I'm trying to build up my work portfolio. Contact me if you're interested.

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I love the idea of a deaf main character. Iris and her predicament are intriguing. The story does need some editing and a proofreader, which I'd be happy to help with if you're interested.

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