bunnyreader1

the first 30 chapters felt really good but after wards the plot seems to have slowed down and characters aren’t being described well after events. the world background needs a lot more details. i will give another chance at 100 chapters

trolling Author lol

20 chapters in and wow,s story has more unique turns than i expected. The MC i human like for someone with no skin and try’s to thinks things out but even when he does something dumb he gets called out for it and he learns from his mistakes. the side characters are fun and have some unique humor to them even if i think some characters might be trying to use Ty, I’m excited to see what happens.

been reading this book off and on. honestly i have to say i’ve been enjoying the new format. every chapter is 8-10 WN chapters with a special put in the middle that gives us background on the world or other worldly events. it’s popular tag down in other novels i’ve seen in hard covers. the writing has honestly improved so much from chapter 70 and on and it’s nice seeing the Author make improvents. the story is enriching and the pacing is a bit slow but enjoyable. can’t to see how this goes

neat fighting system. i hope to see it be used since you spent a lot words on developing it.

another great chapter read. keep it up

good descriptions

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