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Also, for the sake of God, use Quillbot or Grammaly, I can't emphasise how important grammar is, use Quillbot or Grammaly (latter is recommended).
Make a line break between every 4-5 lines, sometimes 2. Atleast make it readable.
By prologue I mean synopsis
Delete this chapter, take all the text,ake it a little better. And put in as the synopsis.
Web novel counts only letters in words, not numbers or symbols
Uh... you should definitely make the chapter longer, maybe around 800 words (1k is minimum for a successful novel, but you're new). And you should write a prologue to your novel, people ain't gonna read a novel if they don't know the basic details.
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uhh... are you talking to a ghost? I have abandoned novel because of my father's death.