Nathan_Huyghe

there are still some mistakes in the chapter concerning the power level

love it 🤣

I'm really divided about this story thus far because it is good but at the same time really awful. The pacing is really weird and the story can be quite confusing sometimes because the author contradicts what he says In the story a lot. you said arsenal won by a lot but then man city was close to winning please take someone to proof read because you really need it same with those current and potential that switch all the time like crazy. please take someone to proof read

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great book would love to see a second one

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maybe it shoul be written another way because it's a really weird sentence

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