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timothy_johnmiu9mthCommentedHAHAHHA eventually he'd be able to resist the poison! I knew it :D!
Only…this time was different. For the first time in his life, Jason ate the mushroom, and only silence filled the air.- timothy_johnmiu9mthCommented
HAhahaha Karl reminds me of a typical fool in life
Ever the master bullshitter, Karl continued to describe the events that transpired while she was asleep, shaking his arms and dancing wildly for emphasis. - timothy_johnmiu9mthCommented
Amazing to see how much Jason has grown already
"It's okay, Eve. You're not alone," he said consolingly. - timothy_johnmiu9mthCommented
love how vivid the writing is
As he tilted his head upwards, the black-haired teenager suddenly caught a glimpse of a familiar creature, and his eyes refocused on the moving blur of black stripes. Karl swung through the trees as if it were second nature and landed nimbly in front of the hate reader with a smug smile. - timothy_johnmiu9mthReplied to Purple_Midnight
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glad to see Jason's maturing
'Shit, how deep are we?' the hate reader pondered to himself. 'No. Shut up, Jason. It doesn't matter. We need to survive. Eve, Karl, and I." - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
panting, is a weird way to start this off
This paragraph has been deleted. - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommentedCh 1 An apple a day…sends you to another world?
- timothy_johnmiu10mthCommentedCh 2 Will you be my First Wife?
- timothy_johnmiu10mthCommentedCh 29 The Pain of Regret
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this is a great moment of self-reflection, powerfully illustrated
"Why was I such a fool?" he screamed internally. "If only I never met Eve or Alea. If only I stayed alone, in a corner without friends, like I had always done. If only I could run away from reality and read happy novels, none of them would have needed to suffer." - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
I laughed pretty hard at his questions
"But…but there are no risks, right?" asked the cautious hate reader hesitantly. "Like…if the process fails, do I become an ugly zombie? Or will I become bloodthirsty and try to suck everyone's blood?" - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
Great way to point back to earlier plot moment!
Second, Nemesis, your direct intervention into the Isles without having submitted a prior request is a strict no-go. Your house arrest ends in another two months, but I wanted this to serve as a warning to the other gods as well. Remember, the Isles are not a proxy for you to settle your own messy disputes. Anyone who dares to intervene again will be put on house arrest for the next decade! - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
I like the idea of poison resistance.
Fortunately, the experiment seemed to be a success. He had experienced a similar sensation back in Butterpond when he had accidentally overtrained and died while running a 10km. Though it had initially pained him to lose a life during training, Jason soon realized that the muscle gains he had earned from his "previous" lives through pushing his body to its extreme limits remained when he revived. This meant that when Jason ran a 10km the following day, he not only had an easier run but also didn't die the second time. Applying this concept to the strength of his internal system, Jason believed that if he ate enough purple mushrooms, similar to how assassins ate poisonous herbs in small doses from birth to numb their body to lethal poison, the effectiveness of the toxins would slowly diminish as his body fought against it valiantly, life after life. And his hypothesis was correct! - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
That's a creative way of employing the terms of contract!
Given that Karl's attempt to poison Jason didn't go against the "direct harm" condition of the Master-Slave contract, Karl was confident that he would be able to kill his new master without being burned by the Eternal Flame. Though he had no idea why his plan had failed, he was sure that today would be his last day. - timothy_johnmiu10mthCommented
Wow that was unexpected
Inching his arm closer, he stabbed himself with the silver-haired vampire's fangs as the blood slowly dripped into her mouth. The little girl, who had returned to her normal, more innocent state, unconsciously gulped and gulped and gulped. His lives were important, but Eve's life was far more valuable. - timothy_johnmiu10mthReplied to novarayne
agree lel^
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I like the hate counter at the end of every chapter. It helps to underpin the timeline of the story
Hate counter: 850