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j_k_l5dReplied to Cecil_JosephCh 1 chapter 1. new world- j_k_l13dReplied to immortal_sword
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yes figure that out thanks. I'm still new to the game of thrones I'm trying my best, so please feel free to tell me any mistake I've made
The Maid beamed with a smile and replied, "Will do, Mrs. Phoenix!" With that, I was in good hands again, and the Maid carried me away, leaving my mother behind. - j_k_l4mthReplied to dope_is_my_name
yes, š the Targaryens name are so similar forgot how to spell them.
Ragnar could then feel his mother's hands hitting him on his head as he turned to look at her in surprise. His mother lady Ashara was kneeling before Prince Aegon and his company. Ragnar quickly realized that he had spaced out, lost in his thoughts. Feeling embarrassed, Ragnar swiftly proceeded to kneel beside his mother. - j_k_l4mthReplied to OverlordBGs
made a mistake there
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- j_k_l4mthReplied to HellDeimoSCh -1 image of Phoenixire on the map of westeros
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i undertstand your reasoning, but I didn't just cut off 1/3 of the reach for no reason. i did my research and found out house Martel wasn't the first ruler of the reach but was given to them by aegon the conqueror after killing the house that controled the reach, then place house Martel as the warden of the reach. So afterall that research I did i decided after house phoenix was the one who help aegon the most, he gave house Phoenix vast lands encompassing some of the reach which extended into the Storm lands.
Ch -1 image of Phoenixire on the map of westeros - j_k_l4mthReplied to j_k_lCh 1 House Phoenix.
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latest chapter redo. so if you read it before redo, you can check it out again make some changes because i didn't like how it sounded
He then soon continueed to search for an exit and found a stairway leading up to a closed door. Clapping his hands together, he exclaimed, "Aha! I guess that's the exit." Advancing toward the door, his white hair billowing in the wind.