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Bro the start is so awesome, and as you narrated them I can feel all the happenings and your words were forcing me to visualize the scene, welcome bro I have just read ch 1 and I love it 💓💓

Thank you bro 💓

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I am working on it, the upcoming chapter 13 is with the new writing style, please compromise for 12 chapters 😆 I will change them too.

Thank you for your support yeah it's my first time so I am working on my writing style and in the upcoming chapters you will see improvement for sure 😇

its my first time so in upcoming chapters you we will see improvement anyway thank you for such an honest review 😇

thank you 😇

yes its my first time I am still learning, in upcoming chapters you will definitely see improvement 🤩

thank you for such an honest review 😇

really! they are just so good mine are not even near to them