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Storie_muxica9mthReplied to Zhoa_FeiThe action should be understand like thisA ferocious strike is approaching me very fast, an attack directed to my head, or neck, tsk......i did not even give time to turn my head to look at the attacker Has that been little clearer?If not, i would like to see yours😊Note: i am practicing to wrote Descriptions for action scenes as short as possible for the readers to get completely hooked to the scene. While reading action scenes from books, explanation of actions is really breaking the fun, at least for me. I am a reader that is little by little becoming an author after all😅
As i am busy thinking while waiting for Sei's answer (the girl i am accompanied with by the way) a very fast approach is heading on my way, in my head or neck... Tsk... I draw out my sword very fast i dont even give time for my head to turn around and look at the attacker.- Storie_muxica9mthReplied to Zhoa_Fei
I would like to know how you understand that😅The action really is strange and is a little hard to explain.If you can do a rewrite for that, i would like to give it a read.Well, if you understand the action being describe despite the weirdness of the description, i guess it's fine.I lack word materials after all
Whoah.. All i see is sei kicking the beast in front of me...as if the whole scene glitches and stop to that view then continues very fast!! - Storie_muxica9mthReplied to B_DRAG
Uhm, yeah, but walking is a process of moving from one place to another through raising up your legs or such.It's not like mastering the way you step your foot; to master climbing up walls, water, or air.Walking simply means walking.😑Thus, another mastery is born,The STEPPERS!!!😎But seriously where do you people get your gif's. 🐴🤔
A Mastery is made available to you if it is related to your class, like a swordsman will be able to get the 'Swordsmanship' mastery. A wanderer can get 'Walking'. A mage can get 'Mana-manipulation', as you can see, there are many masteries. - Storie_muxica9mthCommented
I wonder what i could get mastering the walkerIs there still a wandering person at their town that hasn't mastered walking? 🤣🤣I wonder how a mastered walking looks like
A Mastery is made available to you if it is related to your class, like a swordsman will be able to get the 'Swordsmanship' mastery. A wanderer can get 'Walking'. A mage can get 'Mana-manipulation', as you can see, there are many masteries. - Storie_muxica9mthCommented
Lab rat... Ugh... Well, it's already dead though
Beyern looked at the bag, and then slapped himself mentally. That's his first lab rat, he needed some practice to get it right in the future, and that corpse would be the sacrifice. - Storie_muxica9mthPosted
Whoah, the story writing is kind of original, man... Hey author, are you a director or something? Haha the scenes are professionally done.The read is too smooth which is what i really like.To be honest chapter one is not that smooth, but, anywayEverything is good, too bad i am not into zombies😅I wonder what your fantasy genre novels will looks likeActually i want this 4 star because i hate zombiesBut i should not be bias here🤣🤣🤣
- Storie_muxica9mthReplied to Mauritany_DL
Tsk. Your only trying to get corpse for your necromancer 🙄
As i thought... She never comes here without invitation. She always invite me but i always turned her down. After all, what am i going to do inside the dungeon? Well, to help peoples like her is not so bad but i avoid seeing lonely place or depressing atmosphere which is rich in the dungeon. That place is a damned one! How is that even here on earth? A place where monsters infinitely respawn? Anyway i wont be going there.. Is what i want to say but.. - Storie_muxica9mthReplied to Zhoa_Fei
Flying can also be called running tho😅Every act to survive, may it be with vehicle, swimming, and etc.As far as i know, kt is running for lifeBut if this is pretty hard for the readers, the author will do changes💪
No way.. Can they even run from that person? - Storie_muxica9mthReplied to Zhoa_Fei
No, at the next chapter, reader could understand that the MC still suffers the nightmare because when he woke up, he wipes out substances that is from his dried up tears😁I am trying to cover every plot hole you know🕳️🤣😎
I then give myself a free fall into bed and go to sleep excited for the next day that is coming to me with this unknown phenomenon. Magic that is... - Storie_muxica9mthPosted
I've been reading the two chapters and it's all about a shadow convincing our guy, kazuki, to do revenge. I continue my read and yes it is really good. The pace of the story is all according to what is needed.And after readiing about kazukis power which is the shadows,I just remembered that tje title is tje shadow oath.Whoah! A perfect title for a perfect story!Honorable!
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Well, i just like how kazuki remember to feel delight even though he is on his revenge period😊
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Ahahaha revenge is not that easy my boyBecome an honourable justice dealer rather than savage beast
For the first time in his life, Kazuki truly understood the depths of his own potential. He knew that he had become something more than just a man seeking revenge – he had become an unstoppable force, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. - Storie_muxica9mthCommented
This shogun is pretty kindNo wonder kazuki will crave for revenge
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HahahahaI accidentally put 2 on chapter one and i got no idea where to edit. So i wrote that for the readers to understand
Chapter 2 - Storie_muxica9mthPosted
This one sure is an apocalyptic stateI'm kind of lost for some statements, could be because i am not familiar to it. But overall, the story is interesting. I like how the author write the sceneries in detailed.It seems the author really want to share what is on his/her mind.I'll be binge reading this if i got time⌚😭👀
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That's pretty convenient 🙂
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To be honest I've been wishing to create a pc game like thisBut the server are the strongest playerWhen a player gets reported by the other,The server will kill their character and put them on prison hahahaha (banned for certain days)
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He just got a corpse in the sack didn't he?Probably a gift
But there was a big problem, where was he going to find a dead body? Maybe the cemetery or something would be good, but those were only for the very elite, since every other corpse was cremated. - Storie_muxica9mthCommented
Red drenched bag? What could be possibly it is?Mc not pretty smart sfter all😅
'Oh shit, I'll just... Throw it back into the river maybe? Or should I bury it? Or should I start a forest fire? If the guards get their hand on this, I'll be the culprit, damn seers, I damn you all to hell!' He thought to himself, finding a disposed body was quite the new experience, and he was scared.