This is good so far, but you make it strange every time the heroine does something that she describes as cute or funny, like that girl in the elevator, and now this is a child, the way she changes her mood is cute 🙄

هذا جيد لحد الان لكن تجعل الامر غريبا في كل مرة البطلة تفعل شيئا ما تصفه بلطيف او المضحك مثل تلك الفتاة في المصعد والان هذه طفلة طريقة تغير مزاجها بأنه لطيف 🙄

It is a good novel now, and I think it is better than your previous novel

Just a novel hero like the rest who worries about the original hero of the story and tries to help him To become stronger , and the rest of the matters are trivial like the rest of the novels,Then, at the end, the harem takes over the hero of the original novel and ends

It has become annoying, like other novels that make sure the hero is stronger, and these things are annoying. This is boring

I don't know why everyone who immigrated thinks that he died instead of that maybe someone moved him. I don't know if they knew but were deceiving themselves or what.

Understand how you feel🥲

Every day he is tortured and then you find that he is afraid of pain. He was even ready to sell part of his soul, and then he was afraid of pain. You are the biggest contradiction, you detractor

It's boring for 13 chapters and all I see is him being tortured at least every once in a while and not every chapter 😒

He seems so arrogant. He takes advantage of the family at the same time he doesn't want to acknowledge them🙄

I don't really understand why he saved her

Now he was saying, "I won't trust me" and all this useless talk. Then in the next second, I will protect them. Didn't they betray me? I don't know if he was stupid. Or if betrayal is when it's time for you to fall, you will never know it. In normal time, then it's too late.

He's childish

It seems that this is a rubbish novel. Just because he acquired an artifact, he began to become arrogant like the rest of the same cliché novels

Does your heart beat when you hold a girl's hand?😂

Will Mouloudia remain naive and affected by feelings, or will he develop because I do not like this type?

Garbage novel.

Frankly, it is not your style to write about manipulation. You are trying to portray him as a manipulative person, but he is naive

Well, a fairly good novel, but MC is naive. I mean, all his actions are clear. He also thinks that once he joins a strong family, he will live in peace. Is he a fool??

Thanks for the answer. I apologize, I made a typo wrong