Boomsworth

Pokemon team based around sandstorms is interesting and different. Pacing feels rushed. The main issue I have with it is the whole "Mysterious Past" thing it has going on. The MC definitely has some past trauma, but it isn't explained and then something comes up, triggers his trauma, and nothing about what happened to cause the issues. Makes it really annoying to read

It is going in a good direction. The extra world building makes it more interesting than the usual garbage. The AI used when writing makes it kind of annoying to read

Nice

That fight could have been 10 less chapters. and the grammar felt like it went down hill as the fight progressed.

He has an extra finger

Wanting to watch two dudes kiss? Kinda gay