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This is pretty good. It has a few tiny things that could be be better but they are more of a personal preference than anything. I kind of like how the protagonist has a harem, but not really because he does not care AT ALL. The timeline is stretched out over 1000 years, but it’s done through a lot of time skips which is interesting. I am a bit annoyed that each chapter is so expensive because it’ s been preventing me from reading anything else.

I Would say this is decent, but you can definitely tell it was written by an amateur. The lead up to the first arc is way too long and I got bored with it. The preparation stage wasn’ t that great. You could have added some action or plot building but you really didn’t this is basically a fan fictio with an original storyline. The premise is good. The execution is meh.