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DaoistGnpPr0

DaoistGnpPr0

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2023-05-31 JoinedIndia
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    DaoistGnpPr06mth
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    I joined the Discord

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    DaoistGnpPr06mth
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    what is the platform about?

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  • DaoistGnpPr0
    DaoistGnpPr011mth
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    The story is decent, but there are several moments where you had several grammar mistakes, you need to improve that the story is good and the implementation is decent. That's why I am giving it 3 stars.

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