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Upload 2 chapters together next (with sumt 😋, fmc pov ofc)

I second that

I normally don't even bother to write a review but...this seemed a unique story, quite unique. Overall everthing is all right, tho I would like to give you a few suggestions (I would love it if you apply them) 1) we need more FMC povs, each seggs scene should have dan as well as Aurora's pov(it will be tremendous believe me) 2) when the netori part comes, I suggest you to do it completely in Aurora's pov 3) don't focus on only dan, focus on Aurora as well(make this story a multi protagonist story, with Aurora and dan both being the protagonist) 4) the pacing, honestly it's not bad , but you should slow it down a bit 5) make it a reverse harem where Aurora falls in love with other males as well(make it so that she loves them, ofc not nearly as much as dan) And finally I would plead you to not drop this story