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DivineMelon

DivineMelon

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2023-05-29 JoinedAscension Island
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon1d
    Posted

    Great story as always. The Mc was the perfect definition of someone with the OCD, he wants perfection to all things. The pacing was also balance with time skip here and there. The writing quality is also good. Overall, 5/5.

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    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
    Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon1d
    Posted

    A really good fanfic. It was one of my favorite sport fanfic that I binge read this till my eyes started heating up. Mc was a good but not too good, he act like any normal person would do Infront of arrogant people; Not bow your head or be intimidated. The story progression was quite good, the pacing was slow but not too slow. Good side characters that act as they were in thier original series or anime. Overall, 4.4.

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    Blue Lock: I'm Kira Ryosuke
    Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon2d
    Posted

    I have finished reading till 79 chapters. The story was good. The protagonist was good and kept his character as a villain, he never hesitate to k1ll anyone who comes to his way or don't benefit anymore. There were many spelling and grammar and spelling error but it was bearable. I gave this a 5 despite the flaw as I really like the story. Hope to see more chapters.

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    GOT : Reborn as a Frey
    Book&Literature · Numera
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon11d
    Commented

    I would've already rush to the scene and be done with this nonsense. Just kill the guy and go the main thing. Taking too long. Translators should at least edit scenes like this or remove them as they're useless to the story. Just based on what I've seen so far, it's not worth continuing reading.

    "As long as you're willing to follow me, I can guarantee you'll live well, at least... you won't be a short-lived ghost." 
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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon11d
    Commented

    His strength should atleast be at above vice admiral, and that's only the minimum. He might be even stronger than admiral with even just 1%.

    Although he hadn't fought directly, based on what he had seen from Captain Vaughan's previous battles, his strength should surpass that of the captain. 
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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon11d
    Commented

    It won't be Chinese without this facelapping, lol.

    Vaughan paid no attention to Harry's almost provocative gaze and sternly asked, "Lieutenant Commander Harry, what do you mean by that?"
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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon1mth
    Commented

    I liked their interaction in this chapter but I think it was so soon that Nadia icy heart was broken in just one chapter. I would like how their interaction progress and how Nadia icy heart was melting chapter by chapter but it just instantly happen in this chapters. Anyways, it was just my opinion and the chapter was good.

    Ch 7 First Reward! Special Eyes!
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    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon1mth
    Commented

    Oliver was known by many servants to be a worthless, talentless but a smart child many of the servants. Also, Oliver was able to quickly find where Nadia was training so the whole clan area must be small. Although Oliver was a child that had been kept hidden for over 5 years, Nadia should atleast have some clue about him. Also, there should be some explanation as to why Oliver was kept hidden for 5 years not the nonsense "He was trash so no one should see him to not tarnish the family" reason.

    Ch 5 Nadia Mystic! The ruthless twin
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    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon1mth
    Commented

    A very nice system. I thought that it'll be like those "Give something, get 100x of that" novels but it was new. He will get 10x benefits of the other person training once he bind himself to that person. Now, he just needed that Nadia girl and get stronger fast. Also the the setting seemed pretty good. I haven't read any exorcist type of novel yet so I'm looking forward to this.

    Ch 3 10x binding system? Obtaining 10 times the benefits
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    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon2mth
    Replied to cafreine

    Hi Caffreine! I took your suggestion and was now planning on doing that. Thanks for the suggestion btw and I will put a notice if I had completed it.

    Ch 7 SEVEN: Training
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    Domain Master
    Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon2mth
    Replied to cafreine

    He can move but with limited space.

    After that, Felix immediately saw his yellow domain expanding really fast. It kept going until it covered most part of the ship. Now that his range cover most part of the ship, Felix could feel the presence of many live inside the ship. It was a great feeling for him as with this much range, he could protect those girls until they reach their village.
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    Domain Master
    Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon3mth
    Replied to Manan_Singla

    This is my work.

    Steve started preparing himself by slowly putting his right foot far back, bending down his body, and looking forward with a serious expression. Seconds later, he began running. The force on his right foot made the ground flip up. His running speed was so fast that he estimated it to be faster than lightning.
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    OPM: Normal Neighbor
    Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon6mth
    Posted

    I've read it till chapter 30, it's good, one of the Chinese novels that I've really liked. However, i don't think i enjoy it much that I'm willing to read past the free chapters because it got boring for me pretty fast. But i will still tell the good qualities of this novel. Likable Mc with a power lust mindset. No harem, but there's still romance. No brainless side characters.

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    Apocalypse: Infinite Evolution Starts from Attribute Allocation
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon6mth
    Commented

    Liking Wang ye personality, it's neither Good or Villain, just Anti-Hero.

    Ch 11 Perfection-level Life Evolution Technique
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    Apocalypse: Infinite Evolution Starts from Attribute Allocation
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Commented

    Very nice, i really liked this Demon slayer arc but sadly all things must come to an end. The harem thing is not really that bad but if not too much that is..

    Ch 68 Surprising reaction
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    Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Houssem
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Commented

    I really hope he's smart enough to write it in a language from earth so others can't read it.

    'Now I need to figure out the timeline and a plan of action...' I let out a drawn breath as I flipped the page and started writing again.
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    One Piece: The Strange Talent of Cedric Strode
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Replied to Phaze_MorningStar2

    Females only

    This book has been deleted.
  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Commented

    Hm, giving me the vibe of Blast saving Tatsumaki when she was a kid in the manga.

    "...Finally found you." This man, kneeling on one knee, matched Hancock's eye level. He then asked softly, "...You must be Hancock, right?"
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    One Piece: White Hunter
    Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Commented

    I bet the new special class will have to do with Commander or even just Commander.

    She was able to see that much earlier than me...maybe she even predicted it just from observing the battlefield. I have never participated in such a big battle involving 2 sides with more than 2 thousand soldiers and definitely not as commander so I have absolutely no experience compared to Esdeath.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
    Others · Felix9713
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  • DivineMelon
    DivineMelon7mth
    Commented

    So the 'Hiding Power' is meaningless then..

    Ah... this is what I wanted to avoid. I garnered the attention of the emo half-half brooder and in the making villain. Then I looked towards Momo, she was smiling brightly. That improved her mood a lot, my result was 1,237 meters. I guess I got the second position.
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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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