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A really good fanfic. It was one of my favorite sport fanfic that I binge read this till my eyes started heating up. Mc was a good but not too good, he act like any normal person would do Infront of arrogant people; Not bow your head or be intimidated. The story progression was quite good, the pacing was slow but not too slow. Good side characters that act as they were in thier original series or anime. Overall, 4.4.
I have finished reading till 79 chapters. The story was good. The protagonist was good and kept his character as a villain, he never hesitate to k1ll anyone who comes to his way or don't benefit anymore. There were many spelling and grammar and spelling error but it was bearable. I gave this a 5 despite the flaw as I really like the story. Hope to see more chapters.
I would've already rush to the scene and be done with this nonsense. Just kill the guy and go the main thing. Taking too long. Translators should at least edit scenes like this or remove them as they're useless to the story. Just based on what I've seen so far, it's not worth continuing reading.
His strength should atleast be at above vice admiral, and that's only the minimum. He might be even stronger than admiral with even just 1%.
It won't be Chinese without this facelapping, lol.
I liked their interaction in this chapter but I think it was so soon that Nadia icy heart was broken in just one chapter. I would like how their interaction progress and how Nadia icy heart was melting chapter by chapter but it just instantly happen in this chapters. Anyways, it was just my opinion and the chapter was good.
Oliver was known by many servants to be a worthless, talentless but a smart child many of the servants. Also, Oliver was able to quickly find where Nadia was training so the whole clan area must be small. Although Oliver was a child that had been kept hidden for over 5 years, Nadia should atleast have some clue about him. Also, there should be some explanation as to why Oliver was kept hidden for 5 years not the nonsense "He was trash so no one should see him to not tarnish the family" reason.
A very nice system. I thought that it'll be like those "Give something, get 100x of that" novels but it was new. He will get 10x benefits of the other person training once he bind himself to that person. Now, he just needed that Nadia girl and get stronger fast. Also the the setting seemed pretty good. I haven't read any exorcist type of novel yet so I'm looking forward to this.
He can move but with limited space.
This is my work.
I've read it till chapter 30, it's good, one of the Chinese novels that I've really liked. However, i don't think i enjoy it much that I'm willing to read past the free chapters because it got boring for me pretty fast. But i will still tell the good qualities of this novel. Likable Mc with a power lust mindset. No harem, but there's still romance. No brainless side characters.
I really hope he's smart enough to write it in a language from earth so others can't read it.
Females only
Hm, giving me the vibe of Blast saving Tatsumaki when she was a kid in the manga.
I bet the new special class will have to do with Commander or even just Commander.
So the 'Hiding Power' is meaningless then..