You focus too much on trivial things...mayhaps you should focus on getting on with the story instead of blabbing about nonsensical things. This has gotten far too long! Every chapter can't even be called a chapter! It's full of blabbering and instead of focusing on the story the author's focus is on things that aren't even relevant. Alway describing things for so much of too much! Gods...

That's it?

Sighs...disappointing...now it's gonna become a harem.