Ethan_Verdier_6345
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Ethan_Verdier_63451mthCommentedCh 3 The Tutorial Starts!- Ethan_Verdier_63451mthCommented
Considers*
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Tissues*
This paragraph has been deleted. - Ethan_Verdier_63451mthCommentedCh 1 Fuck you, system (e)
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Are the conversations going to be worded like this during this entire novel? 1st person? Third person? So manag different changes in 1 chapter
[Davis _ Leo's Best Friend] - Ethan_Verdier_63452mthCommented
Looks about right
[Intelligence : 3] - Ethan_Verdier_63452mthCommented
Décent wishes
3.A mirror that can copy any non-living thing with 100% of its ability. - Ethan_Verdier_63453mthCommented
Stupidity at its peak
Anyway, this was reason that I still like Ava and would save her from trouble that going fall on her in some months and also help her to reconnect with her mother. - Ethan_Verdier_63453mthCommented
Wait she died??
Why is she joking like I didn't just try to kill one of her workers?. - Ethan_Verdier_63453mthCommentedCh 1 The Author's Tale
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He’s level 52 but HP is still 100?
[HP:100/100] - Ethan_Verdier_63453mthCommented
50 health at Lvl 50 makes no sense
[HP:50/50] - Ethan_Verdier_63453mthCommentedCh 35 Disruption
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So he’s just going to ignore this part of the system?
[AP: 350] - Ethan_Verdier_63454mthCommented
This entire paragraph is just bad punctuations and grammatical errors
As I proceeded down the sidewalk cars were passing by on the street are in just as much rush as the pedestrians everyone heading towards me moved away like water passing around a rock in a river, until I came upon a group of high school students (4 of them) walking along in their school uniforms, i knew the school since it was my alma mater but the type of kids who go there left me with only the impression that the vast majority were being trained to be arrogant and look down on others. - Ethan_Verdier_63454mthCommented
How? 15?
[Age] 15 (error) - Ethan_Verdier_63454mthCommented
It said the box had 2 swords, but only talk about 1???
"Sorry sir! I didn't know any of that, I will return and just look for some other weapon," Jacob said. - Ethan_Verdier_63454mthCommented
Slip up maybe?
-"Galeblade! Nice choice but the question is, Do you have what it takes to make one for yourself?" the voice inquired and Jacob quickly turned around to see who was speaking and to his greatest surprise it was their teacher Master Hong. - Ethan_Verdier_63454mthCommented
Why not ask system about previous hosts memories?
Ego decided to put his reservations aside for the moment. He had committed to find out more about this place. "I will explore and go talk to the teacher I met earlier, he said he could help."