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Sorry to hear that, it was meant to be written in that vague and unsettling way, as it wasn't really meant to be quite as happy. But I didn't intend for it to be hard to read. It was kind of just my natural voice in my head being written. So I'm sorry that brought confusion.
I can see where the confusion comes from as it really isn't explained at all but the subtext is basically a power imbalance. The Lauragne's hold more power than Gabriel's family. This means that say, like a year before this happens, one of the Lauragne's, it could be any noble family too, came and saw how Gabriel could heal all of these wounds with a touch. So they report back and find more information which then leads to the much more powerful family pressuring Gabriel's family into sending him off to be married to their family because they want that asset for their own. That would be the carrot. As for why they just didn't refuse, or why word wouldn't have spread. To address why word didn't spread is becuase cities, especially in an era like this, are very isolated with people rarely, if ever having contact with any other city. This means that word wouldn't spread. As for the former, it would be because Gabriel's family couldn't refuse, they would be destroyed by the superior political power of the Lauragnes and as such it would be more beneficial to send him there rather than to defy and risk destruction. It wasn't too hard of a choice either because they already have an heir in Gabriel's sister. I hope that makes sense. And I do admit that I should have explained that but its a bit too late.
No, it’s more like the poor girl only saw that her father wasn’t responding and thought that he was dead, only he was just very sick and on the verge of death. It’s from her point of view so I just tried to capture what someone would think when they see corpses around and then come back to their house only to see their dad lying on the floor. Of course she would assume the worst.
No? This is just my natural writing, like I do go back and proofread it and all that jazz but I don’t use AI to write. Plus this is a fanfiction so I just write what makes me happy with the work rather than try and make it perfect, and I’m happy with it being flowery that’s my preferred writing style
Seems about time I actually gave this book a review. So here’s the obligatory five star review. Other than that some might notice that I deleted the twenty chapters I had on this and that’s because I didn’t like them and decided to rewrite the whole thing. Up to the about fifty chapters is planned and ongoing so from those that have read my others this actually has a coherent plot instead of me ass pulling plot out of nowhere. Other than that I hope you enjoy the read. See ya!
While some of that may be true with their not being much reason for this you also need to remember that this isn’t modern earth where love and relationships were everything. This is a time where arranged marriages are sometimes decided at birth and even those that aren’t are still given little choice in the matter as it is more a family and business decision rather than an actual decision made by the person in question. What this means is that the mc knows that these are the norm and if we draw a parallel to real world and here meaning that the man in the story, or the mc is a direct parallel to a noblewomen who while not always happy about it does it. It means that the mc knows that this is about the prosperity of the family and not about him. That is why he doesn’t give too much of a reaction, or why his parents are so cold in this. It’s because this is what is expected rather than some new thing
I haven’t dropped it just stopped for a while since it wasn’t getting the reception that I needed it to get. My other novel got contracted and this one didn’t so people chose the badly planned out and barely plot coherent one over the novel I actually like to write. Honestly I think that this one was so much better but I have to focus on the other and don’t have much time to write this anymore
They shouldn’t have unless I accidentally copied it from the wrong place
It’s was a mix of paranoia and just practical use. He saw that this city pretty much answered to one government that could tell you wether or not you could go into the tower, a place where you can gain lots of power which would seem pretty sketchy from an outside perspective so he decided to make a fake identity that they could track and know of while also resevign a face and identity that he could fall back on to be unknown to the wider world.
Shameless author here to give my obligatory five star review. Basically this is my second novel my first one turned out to be a bit of a disaster. The character development was terrible and so was the power levels so I’m starting a new novel which is this one. My writing style has improved significantly compared to my first novel which I hope that you guys enjoy. Other than that I just wanted to say thanks for reading and I hope that you can give it at least some sort of chance