The writing is very dry. It starts with a action scene were the writing is practically tone deaf. The abyss mages being able to follow a car through tire tracks left behind is stupid. And the dream part is just. The twins are evil and want something.

This is a fanfiction. It is illegal to make money from it. If you want someone to come to your website, do more research.

Genki

Enji

Thanks for the review. I do plan to rewrite the chapters. Also, this seems a bit unneeded but English is my second language and I am using Grammarly to help me correct my spelling.

Asbeel is the angle of ruin, so the skill is part of the virtue system.

It is but way stronger.

Random

The time thing is a power not related to quirks.

Why did you write nuns?

Yes