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  • Daoistjgq3AL
    Daoistjgq3AL11mth
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    please go into the original story and include more commentary in the chapters for the matches and include system interference too as the novel name itself is one. and also if you write some chapters regarding how the system is granted to the mc its nice as no novel brought up the idea of who gave the system

    Overpowered Cricket system
    Celebrities · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    more chapters please and don't make it a harem.

    I Devour Bloodlines and Skills
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    woah didn't expect after a love story a tragic end awaited him 🥲

    urs Jaanu
    Urban · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    karn that too in apocalypse sounds good idea interesting too 🤔

    Legend Of Karn: Warrior undefeated in Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    writing for the first half of chapters is not that up to the mark needs improvement but storyline is 🤩

    Kingdom building system : my system has a bug
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    good going keep it up don't make it a harem please

    How the world turned me into a villain
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    I am vengeance

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 : A Rank Talent
    I write my own talents
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    Damn there are only 6 chapters but Damn again writing own talents seems completely overpowered looking forward for the journey

    I write my own talents
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    shadow melding solo leveling vibes ✨️

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: My first Scripted Talent
    I write my own talents
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    tournMent of titans🤣

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Shadows of Power and the Festival of Titans
    I write my own talents
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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  • Daoistjgq3AL
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    interesting story looking forward for the character development

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Introduction
    I write my own talents
    Fantasy · Asta_utsugi
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