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First_Absolute12hCommentedHeaven Devouring Seal- First_Absolute4dCommented
Make hime mock those whom he knows and has some hatred but make him appear cold to others whom he has zero interactions with; So kinda mix of both
{A/N: Should I let Naruto insult characters like this from time to time and have his carefree or mocking mood, or should I make him just cold?} - First_Absolute8dReplied to ItzVatsal12It was just like "Gotta Collect 'Em All" was his life's motto. He went wild to the extent some kekkei genkais became extinct because of him hunting down their users, affecting the entire world.
- First_Absolute20dCommentedCh 10 Xavier [ X ]
- First_Absolute20dReplied to EgoForge
No no, things are happening at a good pace, and the interactions are also not stretched it's just that nothing majorly interesting is happening, like some suffering, power up, fight, trauma, political drama (i like mc to go through some trauma if he took some other body not just immediately accepts it); That's why i said it's just starting, so author could be just setting things up, the main things will be coming after🙂 good luck
- First_Absolute22dCommented"But, this useful son of yours, swears revenge for your death, mother, and my revenge also for my death, even if I have to spend a thousand lifetimes, millions of years, and three thousand worlds, I will take revenge for all the murders of all my family, brother, father and even mother," Nova declared with his transparent eyes filling with determination.
- First_Absolute23dCommentedCh 4 Unique Skill[4]
- First_Absolute1mthReplied to Uknowme
happens with the best of us 🫂
Suddenly, a burst of rage surged from within him. He should have used his special eyes on them at that time. - First_Absolute1mthReplied to DaoistRjFoXj
~~ gonnn~~
'A high-grade spiritual weapon huh, it would've been hard to deal with if we let him use the weapon, too bad for him I've watched enough "golden balls" to know not to let my opponent charge up their attack' - First_Absolute2mthReplied to Ratnik
- First_Absolute2mthCommented
The white room huh
Chapter 1: The White room - First_Absolute4mthCommented
the novel is good but I think it's going too fast and mc hasn't gone through any failure and gets stronger then anyone he fights, i feel like he should also lose,(maybe not lose but come to self realisation or something along the lines) so their could personal growth,it will give more depth to the characters,maybe you should also slow down a little and go in a little bit more detail...(personal opinion)
Ch 13 Bully the Weak and Respect the Strong - First_Absolute4mthCommented'A high-grade spiritual weapon huh, it would've been hard to deal with if we let him use the weapon, too bad for him I've watched enough "golden balls" to know not to let my opponent charge up their attack'
- First_Absolute4mthCommented
Don't know how to express herself....she reminds me of someone
''Pfft! Why I'm even angry when the doll doesn't possess emotions and doesn't know how to express herself?" Noah laughed, it was funny now he thought about it, his resentment vanished but not completely, he was now more clearheaded upon recalling how Lilith was. - First_Absolute4mthCommented
did eren know he ate his father? it's been some time since i saw Aot but i think he doesn't remember that he ate his father .
"Can you bring my mom back? Can you stop my father from making me eat him?" - First_Absolute4mthReplied to First_AbsoluteCh 7 Ch-6:Complex Relations