nanatsusaia

I liked the beginning of the story very much. Exciting, surprising and funny in a splattered way Unfortunately I have to find out the further I read the story, the worse it gets! I am currently in chapter 665 and in particular the World Building is becoming more and more grotesque. Measured by as the story is told, practically 90% of the total population in the other world should have been enslaved. The children's mortality rate in the conditions that are always shown should be so height that the complete population should be practically extinction. Witjh this Slave System, an absolute and overwhelming ruthless and violent nobles class should have formed over a larger period of centuries. At the same time, there should be a huge slave population. But the few nobles that have been presented to us have been super friendly and are sold as classic symptivents. Also the villages and Citys have not enough Slaves. At least far too many free simple citizens were presented. I am shortly after the victory over Fargo Village and the way how the mc deals with Fargo and Bright Village is catastrophic. In order to grant your own protection of your own village, these sub-villages must be expanded in protection. The higher the defense of the other villages, the higher the chance of survival of Altera. At the beginning of the Altera Story, the MC insisted on using the best possible defense. but now? Now doesn't care about the survival of its own population? And yes, the residents of Fargo are now also residents of Altera. I also gave the writing style a bad note. The same methods are used again and again. Oh no, I'll be killed right away and... wush, a sword/arrow/or what else comes in between and saves me. I forgot how often the same picture is used over and over again. And yes, I understood that the husband believes that his wife is working too much, only to remind her of her status as a wife. Seriously? This is super uninspired and simply disrespectful. In addition, after the umpteenth time it is really annoying. I will read it further and hope that the story and the style will get better again. If I change my opinion, I will update the post.