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also his vitality grow cus he endured the pain when he absorbed the dark mana

hm to explain it simpler if you workout everyday eventually u will notice small changes while as for bell since he has the system advantage he can grow fast unlike any average, another example when bell couldn't even handle holding the axe for too long, after hours of him trying and trying he can now lift it normally since his stats increase also if you stopped reading this novel I would like to hear ur opinion on why'd u stop thx

you give a detailed review/comments especially I keep seeing ur comment on novels I read, so I have a shameful request if u could critique my novel be brutality honest

I'm putting a review CUS my readers be too shy to comment nor review ಠ⁠ಗ⁠ಠ

it's easy to read and the mc just have a good humor and attitude, I enjoy the pacing and the time it's taking for the world building ^^ will be expecting great things in the future

the build up is actually good, I wouldn't say it's perfect but it is understandable on why or how the narrative are great at explaining.

I can't say much yet since it's only been 2 chapter's but what I can do say is that ill be hoping a great future for this novel, the fight scene was great although it could use some tweaks but it was easy to understand and visualize it in my head I do like the route of the villian so I'll be hoping for more.

try "ruffled " for more like tender or care or I have misunderstood .

is it a typo? "am"? or "I'm"?

perfectly described someone I know