ThePlagueDoctor_1753

He healed Tin by boiling him, it only worked because it was an undead. Plus I think it would be hard to explain how he did it to everyone else.

I imagine Gojo would wear the headband as a blind fold, like how Kakashi wears it but covering both eyes instead of just one.

Imagine he adapts to gain booge wooge? a 9 foot tall monster that can teleport? Horrifying. Also great chapter!

You might want to censor or completely remove that N-word from the chapter, you might get the story taken down or worse.

It pretty hard to put Big Raga's shear aura into words. I personally think you did really well for what I can only assume to be your first time writing a fight scene.

Mahoraga doesn’t have eyes at all, not even the sealed ones you’re talking about. He has 4 wing like appendages for eyes, and a mouth with no lips always showing his teeth. Im not sure where you got the sealed eyes and no mouth thing from. Other than that great chapter, keep up the good work.

Two chapters in one day? It truly is a Christmas Miracle.

There are honestly 3 ways I could see Erasure effecting Riku, 1. Nothing happens because he is technically a shikigama and doesn’t have a quirk. (Doubt this would be the case) 2. His curse energy and wheel get deactivated but the second he is no longer effected by erasure he starts adapting to it because he can adapt to anything and everything. (Most likely to happen) 3. He fades out of existence and dies (Extremely doubtful that this would happen)

Nice chapter, grammar and wording is a bit off but it’s still good. Interested in seeing where this goes, keep up the good work.

I decide to look at your profile out of curiosity, and would you look what I see… your cheating on your Mahoraga fanfic with a Jogo fanfic… pathetic. For real though balancing college and two fanfics at the same time is not going to be easy, I would suggest focusing 1 at a time (Maho please). Im just looking out for you man.