King_Degenerate

Yea, I imagine characters in an anime-y way so the ear-to-ear sounded so for me. Yea, it works now that I think about it realistically. I apologize for the misunderstanding.

use like 'laughed at the jokes they each told' or smth. OR just ignore me cuz I may be giving some wrong advice

use the word 'laughed' here. they smiled ear-to-ear sounds too creepy and gives some murder vibes but its fine if you're going with that

then use chat gpt as well. it improves the prose and you can tell if a section of the chapter is good or not. If you're confused, ask away

I appreciate the simple name you used.

Thanks for one of the rarest thing I get in life (praise). I hope you genuinely said so as I'm still insecure about this

yeah, I found that by ch 5. it was a good read. And how was mine I'm thinking of quitting cuz it's boring so I hope you shed some light on that.

Yeah, the chapter was good. But I will recommend something. Use Grammarly app to edit your chapter's grammar. The plot is solid and it kept me reading the whole chapter in one sitting which is quite abnormal for me so yeah, keep up the good work

I just had a cool thought and I think you might like thisIf god gave the hunters power, he would give it to those who need it or those who are competent. If they turn bad or follow evil, their powers would be taken and distributed as quests to those who need it. Like killing those who destroyed your life won't be counted as sin here, but killing the innocent will be a sin. then you can have the bad guys take innocent people as shields and the good guys can't kill them because in the end, it will be them who kill. Delete this comment if you use that idea since I don't want you to be criticized for using others'ideas.

as a Hindu religious person I appreciate you putting god here