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HotAsianBoy

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I live with happiness, true or not, it is still happiness. The hymn of vivshi - ongoing

2023-05-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy4mth
    Replied to HotAsianBoy

    Kinda a spoiler but not really, he is cursed to be evil in order to protect those around him

    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy4mth
    Replied to 0THeunkown0

    He is not a good guy nor a bad guy, would say he is like an antihero. If I could reference him to other characters it would be something like Itadori Yuji + Hajime Nagumo, but he isn’t edgy

    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy5mth
    Commented

    bro, what are these sentences the characters are cooking up after meeting each other for the first time

    Ch 2 THE BEGINNING
    HOW I BECAME THE STRONGEST IMMORTAL
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy5mth
    Commented

    Is he sleeping on the floor or something?

    Ch 1 THE PAST
    HOW I BECAME THE STRONGEST IMMORTAL
    Fantasy · Flaming_star
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy6mth
    Commented

    The child is the demon king

    Ch 2 The Matriarch in Black
    The Persecuted King
    Fantasy · Miles_J_B
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy6mth
    Commented

    Is bro holding up a baby while drunk? Bro is even walking around with it. Isn't that a little dangerous?

    Ch 1 The Story Begins
    The Persecuted King
    Fantasy · Miles_J_B
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Posted

    Hi, Hotasianboy here! This is my first time writing a lengthy novel like this. I hope you guys enjoy everything my novel has to offer! If you guys have any questions please comment and I will respond as fast as I can. If you guys are wondering this novel is going to be around 300 chapters long. I have a lot planned out and I hope you guys will be able to experience this story with me! ^^

    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Replied to Kexer
    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Posted

    The novel has quite a wide array of interesting things like a magic system, mystical beings and demons. There is also two separate worlds that I think kinda resembles an isekai. Good pacing and weird momentos I like!

    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    Indeed, run to the carriage!

    Ch 8 The Giant Chase1
    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Replied to OnikunStudios

    Yep, it was his past memories of his brothers

    She nodded and I told her to follow us to our hideout. She hesitated for a moment but Oslovi hopped onto her head and she was smitten by its cuteness. Following us to our hideout to pick up Emovi.
    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    So basically, this guy gets a job, fails to kill, gets domain expansioned and now in a different world or dimension

    Ch 3 The Domain
    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    Bro became zoro v2 , folded by an old man

    Ch 2 Serum Inside The Rat
    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    Does the spells not attract the police or people nearby? Wouldn’t people report about weird sizzling sounds near a school?

    Ch 1 Enter The RugRat
    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Replied to OnikunStudios

    You will see later in chapter 3 >:)

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    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Replied to OnikunStudios

    Yep, he basically kidnapped a princess

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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Replied to OnikunStudios

    He is pretty tall. He is 176 cm but the mc is really short! Vivshi is around 158cm

    "The mark on your cheek... It's unlike any aeon I've seen before. It exudes an ominous aura, sending chills down my spine," he remarked, lowering his sword to prepare for his next strike.
    The hymn of vivshi
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Posted

    I see that you but a lot of effort into building this world! I hope to read more of it. Although it wouldn’t really hurt to double check the text to see if there is any grammar problems or if something is out of context to make the text flow more clean.

    King Of Necromancer
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    Was the beginning a flashback of his past memories or was it a future precognition ?

    Ch 1 Cracked In Sky
    King Of Necromancer
    Fantasy · Ink_Weaver122
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  • HotAsianBoy
    HotAsianBoy7mth
    Commented

    Nice opening, a lot of descriptions about the world.

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Deviant Devil
    Fantasy · Kexer
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