BlueBoyo101

you say that as if you have written intelligent characters?

can we not act like Aizen being smart makes him invincible? so many fics pump Aizen up and make him the mcs literal nightmare. Without considering the fact they gave their mc powers that can easily destroy Aizen!

I really like the simulation segments, but holy shit does the author love tentacle rape. he just keeps shoehorning it in over and over. there have been multiple mentions of characters whose only purpose is having had been raped, they serve no other purpose. The evil god lackeys are so stereotypical Japanese hentai rapist that you can really tell the author's influences. If you're into that nice I guess, but why did none of the other reviews mention that!? it's a shame that all the characters are so two dimensional, and basically just feel like a vehicle for fetish shit. When the writing quality is otherwise quite good. anyway pass

Okay I get it I get it I'll just drop this shit at this point, you really love shoehorning in the rape to a point that it's ridiculous. this is like the third time we are talking about someone who has no importance as a character other than having been raped. We get it! the evil gods have to be killed! there is enough motivation already! Its my fault I suppose since the whole story is likely just a vehicle for these kinds of scenarios.

you have no obligation to stay consistent writing this story, but as a reader and supporter it's lame. I'm glad I stopped supporting on patreon right before this, because if I was still paying I would be more upset. though I do appreciate you announcing the hiatus rather than just ghosting. I hope I am not coming off unreasonable or rude. it's just that I doubt many people will support this project if it does not get a consistent release schedule.

I can't tell if this is the authors disguised trauma dump? maybe it's character building but it just took me out of my immersion.

A common Chinese way to say a lot or near infinite, you will see often "there are 3000 great dao's" They don't mean exactly 3000, they do sometimes but mostly they mean countless.

In Bleach, Ryoto could have done nothing and still won. The fact he went here with no plan while injured is just a joke. It feels forced asf

Its still just plain less meaningful and much lamer than it could have been, "its still the same Vahn" Well isn't everyone Vahn anyway? It would have been way more satisfying if he had a homecoming after 700 years, not this weird alternate Vahn even if he is technically still him.

Einlion has a cuck fetish but likes to deny it, frustratingly he will only respond to one part of any comment and ignores all that he does not want to awnser. You can see this in other reviews so lets get some examples. Vahn chains Freya up and lets Ottar fuck her from the other room. After Ottars kid is born Vahn goes for sloppy seconds and has one with her too. Artoria Is willing to sleep with her son 'because that is what dragons do' but fans hated it and it was never brought up again. Kusakabe You wants to have a relationship with Izayoi and Vahn at the same time but fans hate it and it was never brought up again. Sis tells Vahn to learn to deal with his women with his templates, which are not him. Even if you say that they are him then everyone is him, he is every soul so anyone can bang his women and it not be cheating! Fans hated it and it was never brought up again. Einlion does this a lot where he will show his fetish, disgust the audience and then ignore it ever happened. There is also the harem in his harem if that bothers you, lots of lesbian cheating. Vahn never gets cucked per say, but its hinted at so many times that when the author denies it he is just being silly.