Thanks for the feedback. You mean the dialect? Yes, I used Modern Early English for how the characters talk; Lilith and Aella use Early Modern English, and the Dryads use Shakespeare style; "This is how those gents talketh". Start chapter 27; I added the translation because of a demand in a private message. And for changing tenses, the WN doesn't apply all the italic fonts from Microsoft Word. I used present tenses for the main character thoughts, and it should be italic font, but like I said before, the WN browser doesn't apply the italic font as I copy and paste from Microsoft Word, so there will be confusion about why some sentences use present tenses and some sentences use past tense. Speaking of old British English, there was some thought from me to use something older than early modern English; it's the Saxon language. That's the real of old British English, which will be a little bit German, like "good morning"; it will be "Godne Morgen", yet it will be hard and long to learn, so I stick some early modern English and some Shakespeare style. So once more, thanks again for the feedback...