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Lord_Raven

Lord_Raven

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven1mth
    Replied to Chris_Reyes_3054

    *College Exams

    Ch 8 Truth Or Dare! A Nostalgic Memory!
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven1mth
    Replied to Chris_Reyes_3054

    Just a little busy in real life with certain things and helping my sister prepare for her last high school exams and arranging for her to move to another city in the summer for university. I aim to post 5 chapters a week and it should return to normal posting soon.

    Ch 8 Truth Or Dare! A Nostalgic Memory!
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  • Lord_Raven
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    Replied to Nebucatneca3119

    It was explained; she is the owner of the Greed Keystone, hence her title is the witch of greed.

    'Medea... don't let your curse control you again. Or I will take control and kill him! I am not his familiar after all.'
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to Lemon_Pope

    Time to eat all the wolves!

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to Unknownuserleft

    What? If you mean the heroines then yes they are due to their pact with the devil of each sin.

    Ch 21 The True Side of Witches
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to DaoistHerbz

    Let me know if you find out, so I can work on it for future books, thanks for reading.

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Commented
    A tribal black heart with broken lines and sharp edges with black wings on either side formed on the back of his left hand while the emerald magic inside Eva began to transform and change in the same style.
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Commented

    Her

    "Tsk... how could he mark me with such a strange emblem and in such a lewd place?"
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to CHAOS_FOOLISH

    none

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to Duc_1716

    It's based on a novel and is in a novel world, the romance is developed as the story progresses. It's supposed to be like that. I am happily married thanks, so I know how real people act. This isn't real people though, fyi. They become real the longer the novel progresses (:

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to LamenThief

    No worries brother, I enjoyed LK very much. I just enjoyed the inital family setup and felt a little salty, haha.

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Posted

    The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure. The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels. As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.

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  • Lord_Raven
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    Commented

    Sorry, but that's how nobility was, with arranged marriages from childhood. So why are you painting him out to be some super bad guy for no reason but to force this twisted romance between Aria and Arthur? It's disgusting and cringeworthy. Aria needs to wake up from her dreamland, maybe a good slap, and Arthur should be more thankful to his dad. The Novel had a good idea and story, but forcing this just for some silly Inc*st makes no sense. You ruined Draven just because you didn't want to upset the unicorns.

    Ch 28 Natural Course
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to Nebucatneca3119

    The Harem will be 7 minimum (seven witches) but as the title says, he must conquer them, it will be slow as their relationships build and he might have a lover of two who aren't the 7 and before meeting the witches of sin he will develop with them, but at most it will be 10 people but 9 is my aim. Rather than a playboy, he will be a very affectionate and caring man and as a prince/royal multiple wives isn't an issue with his upbringing, but he refuses to marry/date someone he doesnt love and they must also be willing. He will change slightly, the further story goes on, because of his race and what he is but that's a spoiler I cannot go too far into depth about!

    Ch 11 Meditation - Strange Information
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to Nebucatneca3119

    It's just the setting of the world. I don't plan to add anything needlessly dark to the past/women who are heroines, but people who are sub characters or mobs might die or get injured during large battles as the world is very volatile. But even that won't be too prominent, as the novel is about Sigurd's journey around the fractured world and realising that his task doesn't mean he HAS to kill the witches of sin, but can also conquer them as women. Well some of the heroines will have a dark past, but that will NOT/NEVER include anything like R*pe/S*xual Abuse but is merely being used by the church to kill the Agmar as slaves (Which was thousands of years ago.)

    Ch 10 The Difference Between Elf And Half Elf - Magical
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to GentsPlsDontLaugh

    Thank you very much.

    "Rosa, can you teach him your body tempering technique and explain the differences between witches and you chevaliers? I upset Elder Clarice; she wants me to make potions for her until sunset..."
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to GentsPlsDontLaugh

    A friend's novel, but he dropped it

    [The book is Surviving the Apocalypse with my S Rank wives...]
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to GeneralDeFartos_L

    Nope, it's just highlighting he's read the novel and repeated the conversation and his death scene seven times.

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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to RAMINATOR

    It's a British slang. Noone cares about your American rangers.

    The loud click of his metal centre stand was pushed into the gravel facing the forest entrance, and the entire parking lot was empty. No customers, visitors, or even the family that ran the forest seemed absent.
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  • Lord_Raven
    Lord_Raven2mth
    Replied to alexbabyyahoo

    No

    Ch -1 Character Covers
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