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I am writing a review, because I see that there is a lot of work put into it, and I appreciate the good grammar and writing, I hope this doesn't get dropped, since it is common for new stories to get dropped. I am still unsure how this story will go, it says fantasy but the story is set in a cyberpunk setting that existed in 2020, a weird and interesting combination. I'll watch your career with great interest.
if this story was built on realism, the dude would've turned to ash and that's it, no reincarnating into a superhero world.
Ivan is a misguided person, he's brilliant but he wasted his talent being his dad's rage ashtray, which left his potential unfulfilled, all he wanted was revenge, and what better revenge than success? so let's see a no evil or dead Ivan Vanko can do when given a chance to go down a new road, which isn't to become a hero but to actually use his talent.