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Kaylon

Kaylon

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2023-05-19 JoinedUnited States
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon10mth
    Replied to Nort_Tort

    Sorry typo

    Glaring at Chuck and Mark, Light's voice filled with a sinister aura as he declared, "But this time, I'm going to watch the life fade from their eyes. No one will stop me!"
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to LanumKing

    Yes I’ll read more later and do research on immortals

    War On Man
    Fantasy · LanumKing
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Posted

    I only gave it a 4.8 just because I’ not really familiar with immortal novels but the beginning of the story is very awesome so keep it up 😋

    War On Man
    Fantasy · LanumKing
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Posted

    So far I got up to chapter 5 and it’s really good. It has a lot of details and imagery to paint a picture as to what is going on. It’s a very good storyline. I’ll read more but it deserves 5 stars

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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Commented

    For this part you can put () if you want for her thoughts. It allows the readers to know that’ her thought process

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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Commented

    So far it it gives like overlord vibes but at the same time it’ unique and has a lot of imagery, I really don’t see anything wrong with it in my opinion

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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Commented

    This has some very good lay out as to what’s going on. Nice 👍🏻👍🏻

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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Commented

    So far so good

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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to fox_silver

    Mind reading smiling demon?

    Ch 50 Sword
    Cosmos Divider - Lord of Mysteries
    Book&Literature · ParagonDaoOfBS
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to Pumaz

    Mind reading Smiling demon ?

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to kendell_fisher

    That’s the idea, it’s only chapter 10

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Triumph Amidst Chaos
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to jake_tyke

    He isn’t helping just telling them what to do, I will make everyhing more clear on the next chapter.

    Trying to regroup, Light refocuses his attention on his companions. "Hey, Lily, untie Katelyn so we can get out of here."
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to jake_tyke

    Trust me villain arc is coming

    Light said, "If I hid from those monsters, I would want someone to look for me. I know how they must feel being scared and alone…"
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to jake_tyke

    Yes I will be writing more chapters soon

    Sarah snorted, "Yeah, you wouldn't be alive if we didn't find you."
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to AbyssalHunger

    It’s on the second chap ter

    Amidst the chaos, I was pushed and trampled on, cursing the cruel world that alienated me while unconscious.
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to Wyvers

    Yeah but I’m trying to make him more of a menace to society lol

    As they waved their arms to get the army's attention, the soldiers noticed them but were met by an unknown force. A hobgoblin in armor, lance in hand, rode a monstrous horse, leading an army of its own. The human soldiers tried to hold them off, their bullets seemingly ineffective against the hobgoblin's forces.
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to Wyvers

    I cut that part out just because he was just home, grounded I didn’t think it would be interesting to the readers but I can add it if more ppl want me to

    While in the Lunchroom, as I sat alone, the teacher, Ms. Anderson, approached me with a mix of concern and reproach. "Light, I heard about what happened yesterday. Is everything alright?"
    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to BAKumi

    I was trying to get more people with the synopsis, I did get a good review o it despite of the length haha

    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Posted

    Really good lay out of the story, the writing is a bit wordy, but again it makes up for the story itself. It’s a really good read and I recommend more people to read it :)

    Cultivation God -My Harem
    Fantasy · BAKumi
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  • Kaylon
    Kaylon11mth
    Replied to SoManyAngels

    Typo I was writing at 4 in the morning

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    Smiling Demon
    Fantasy · Kaylon
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