Kaylon
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Sorry typo
So far I got up to chapter 5 and it’s really good. It has a lot of details and imagery to paint a picture as to what is going on. It’s a very good storyline. I’ll read more but it deserves 5 stars
For this part you can put () if you want for her thoughts. It allows the readers to know that’ her thought process
So far it it gives like overlord vibes but at the same time it’ unique and has a lot of imagery, I really don’t see anything wrong with it in my opinion
This has some very good lay out as to what’s going on. Nice 👍🏻👍🏻
So far so good
Mind reading Smiling demon ?
He isn’t helping just telling them what to do, I will make everyhing more clear on the next chapter.
Trust me villain arc is coming
Yes I will be writing more chapters soon
It’s on the second chap ter
Yeah but I’m trying to make him more of a menace to society lol
I cut that part out just because he was just home, grounded I didn’t think it would be interesting to the readers but I can add it if more ppl want me to
Typo I was writing at 4 in the morning