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MsPretty10mthCommentednext chapter please
"Sorry, I didn't mention the master's last orders. 'Never let her out no matter what'"When the master had given her this order she didn't see the need to tell Regina because she thought no one will ever want to leave such a good life. Now, Regina had proved her wrong, she tried to leave the mansion. She found it funny.- MsPretty10mthCommented
this paragraph have errors, just helping
"We have a lot to talk about Sky" " yeah you're right" " but first go take a shower then head down stairs for lunch and we can talk" Skylar was led to her room, she got in and locked the door. There wasn't a queen size bed and the room was in white. She stripped and got into the shower, and came out few minutes later and went into the walk in closet. There were different brands of clothes she wore tight blue jeans, a white hoodie completing the outfit with a pair of white sneakers and left for lunch. - MsPretty10mthCommented
this paragraph have errors, just helping
Lunch was served and they began to eat when Skylar asked " so how have you been,got a new boyfriend " " hey don't start " he scolded playfully "well you're much of a man whore" sky responded " what about you what brings you here, suddenly missed me " " oh come on,I um " Skylar wasn't afraid to tell Maxton because even though he wasn't a werewolf he knew they existed. " what's wrong sky please try me " Maxton whispered while soothing her. " he rejected me Max he rejected me and it hurts so bad " skin said sobbing. "Your mate rejected you what an ass hole here doesn't know what he's lost ." "I don't wanna go back" sky said through tears "don't worry I won't let anyone hurt you " "he and everyone in that pack including my brother have treated me like trash" "ssshhh I promise you we'll get back at them but now let's go shopping" he responded excited "you're such a girl " Maxton was gay but when he was around his friend he was more like bipolar, since he had a crush on her. But he shook the feeling away in order not to ruin their friendship. "Let's go Max ". They got outside and when Max revealed his blue Lamborghini, Skylar begged to ride it " oh pretty please just one ride I won't scratch it" Maxton let out a frustrated sigh " fine but if you scratch it I..." "thank you " - MsPretty10mthCommented
how can she do that, at least, he can go home and say goodbye, or even write a latter or sms.well, I'll proceed with the story
Skylar left home without saying goodbye to her parents and she missed them so much. Now, she was on her way to country G to meet her gay friend ' Maxton 'whom were very close during their childhood hood but he had to go when his parents divorced. Now standing in-front of a large mansion,Skylar rang the bell and someone whom she presumed was the butler opened the gate and let her in."um hi I'm here to see Maxton, tell him Skylar is looking for him" - MsPretty10mthPosted
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i was reading the first chapter and wanted to quit the book, but something told me to continue.the story is really getting intriguing. What will happen next, the pages are infront me, but I ask myself the question.Really intriguing.Hope you will update frequently[img=update][img=update]
Ch 2 You’re my mate - MsPretty10mthCommented
if you really want to run away, do it before taking a bath, you fool.
"I should take a bath first ,then I'll think of an escape plan"she said to herself while still scanning the room. - MsPretty10mthPosted
At least a real horror movie, first three chapters are good, but update, I want to read more.
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- MsPretty10mthReplied to MsPrettyCh 7 Our Marriage (Continuation of chapter 3)
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little error
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He's hilarious 😆 always bluffing
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another tiny error
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A little error in this paragraph, just helping[img=Loving it]
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pray harder
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Another over confident mafia boss.
~Stop drooling over me like that, I know I'm hot~